Glenstonx

Just to review this: I'm sure this will be a fantastic story starting from so many questions about what is happening. However, I think you need to focus on the 'hooks' of each chapter cause personally, it doesn't make me want to go to the next page. But you have a great talent for wording and divisions of phrases that might have an impact on the readers, and for also building tensions. Good luck, author! rooting for you

Laughing, he said* be mindful of the correct placement of punctuation

Thank you! Your support really motivated me to continue writing, I hope this book was to your satisfaction

thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it

thank you so kuch!

Hi author, I think your book has great potential, your story seems to be interesting and it just piques our interest, yknow. Although your book is really commendable, I think you should be posting chapters as often as you could. It drives my interest away, as a reader. That's the only downside of this book. Anyway, I'm wishing you a fast pace and good luck! Regards, Glenstonx

Hi author, You had a great start, it just needs to be consistent. I read some minor errors but it doesn't reel me out from the story. Clarify some scenes and it'll be perfect! Wishing your book good luck! Regards, Glenstonx

Hi author! Your work was great! hats off to you, author! I was amazed at how you used italicized and bold fonts for separating the narration from the thoughts or events in the story. The story itself is quite interesting, hardly find any flaw. I hope you continue updating constantly! Your work has great potential, so keep going! Regards, Glenstonx

Thank you!

Thanks!