Shalott

I love this chapter. Gustav and David's conversation totally captivated me.

The book is okay. It didn't grab me, but I guess it's a matter of sentence construction. Many sentences are just too long, tedious and confusing. This makes it difficult to read and slows the reader down. Instead of focusing on the fate of the characters, I find myself trying to unravel overly complex sentences. If the author corrects this, the book will be better

I highly appreciate ML's internal conflict. A new situation can turn someone's world upside down, make him stop thinking and make his behavior chaotic. The author brilliantly shows how the new collides with the old in David's life. There are more interesting characters in the book and I can't wait to see their plots blossom. I'm looking forward to a long story.

It's a little strange, but true, how people can live normal and carefree lives when they don't know that their friends are going through difficult times. Jack is one of my favorite characters. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for him!

Good chapter. Thank yaou!

I really love these two! This couple has an incredibly deep understanding of each other. It's a beautiful thing.

It is my pleasure :)

I think Martin came up with a very good idea :)

I read the first chapter of this book 2 years ago. Author, I think you have grown with your characters over that time :)

Very enjoyable to read this chapter. I like the direction the relationship between the two is going.