Spicybuun
sleepwalking through the days
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Hellooo! Not sure if you'll ever see this but here goes. Congrats on passing 100 chapters! You go, girl! I'm going to remove my previous review because I'm changing it to five stars [img=recommend][img=recommend] P.S. Also, thank you so much for supporting my novel, <3 but I might not be updating for a really long time cause I'm going to mass release like 40 chapters and that's def going to take forever to write. So you don't have to waste your power stones on my novel :) I'll continue supporting yours so keep up the amazing work!
Thank you!
I was planning for the building to be one of those parking garages but I guess I should make that clearer. Thank you for letting me know!
treeeeeees lol sorry ill shut up now
Yess it was, but most readers despise reading super long flashbacks as they can't wait to read the main story, so maybe take out the unnecessary parts to shorten it if possible? Otherwise, it was great! (unnecessary as in parts unrelated to the main plot revolving around the two mcs. If that part is a huge hint or piece of info for the future plot don't remove it). Just a suggestion! No need to do it if you don't want to. Author to Author, I get how hard it is to delete something you really wanted to include into the story.
hehe you never know, them guns could be pretty tho uvu
oml that flashback was long
Similar instead of Familiar?
Is it suppose to be quiet? not quite? idk :p
cutee
dang
hE's FaLlIng iN LuV
DA FIRST MEETING