DBoblivion
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DBoblivion1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วMy ability to memorise hasn't failed me so far, so why is it failing me now? Right when I need it the most. What else did I forget? Deciding to scroll through my sent mail, I stumble upon even more inconsistencies in a photo I sent to Horikita.- DBoblivion1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว(Insert pic in replies)
- DBoblivion1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว(Insert pic in replies- Fuck you webnovel)
- DBoblivion1dตอบกลับถึง BurgerNoTomatoes
how do you comment on your own work? I want to put an image in paragraph comments of my cote fic but no matter how many times I click on the thing it won't let me
Cracking his neck, Satoru sat down and settled a piece of parchment on the desk, wielding the quill and ink with expertise, writing a response. - DBoblivion1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I feel like Rudy should be more formal but maybe there's some character writing I don't know about
As always, I hope my portrayal of the characters ESPECIALLY GOJO was accurate or seemingly accurate lol. - DBoblivion1dตอบกลับถึง DBoblivion
runs in the family
He'd describe it... A tad creepy. - DBoblivion1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
OI THAT's HIS NATURAL FACE
He'd describe it... A tad creepy. - DBoblivion2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วLike some blonde twins trying to revive their mother from the dead?
- DBoblivion5dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
even if the cursed energy he has is minuscule, the unique condition of simply housing both mana and cursed energy in one body presents extremely interesting possibilities to me
His expression was contemplative and unmoving as he juggled with the newfound discovery, 'Interesting... separate from the giant pool of mana, deep inside his gut - A solid pool of Cursed Energy. Though minuscule and lacking in any form of innate technique. He'd be a 4th Grade Sorceror at best. Just like Nanahoshi, his Cursed Energy isn't leaking, despite not being a Sorceror.' - DBoblivion5dตอบกลับถึง Jj_Abrego
- DBoblivion7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I'd put him slightly below suzaku from code geass
Itadori Yuuji is stronger than Prime Ayanokoji - DBoblivion7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
theres an S?
Physical Ability: S - DBoblivion8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
idiot trio are gonna be either the SQUAD, the STUDENTS or something else I feel like Yamauchi's..traits have serious interactive potential with Todo's delusions but maybe its just me
"I'm Yamauchi Haruki. A former professional baseball player and tennis coach. It's a shame I got injured, I would've definitely beaten you guys, though! Hahahhahaah!" Yamauchi chuckled. - DBoblivion16dตอบกลับถึง TempestNotion
I'd suggest simply extending the timeframe If not maybe add a bigger emphasis on how good Sauros is as a leader that he was able to coordinate and mobilise people and resources so quickly to set up the refugee camp as for where these resources come from maybe have the nearby travelling merchant or surrounding communities with a debt to Sauros and the Fittoa region help out
Ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie - DBoblivion17dตอบกลับถึง TempestNotion
is that really enough time for people to not only make it back to the region but also structure a refugee camp? I feel like things should be a lot worse this early on Maybe it is and I haven't read your work properly (forgive me if that's the case)
Ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie - DBoblivion17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie
- DBoblivion18dตอบกลับถึง Jj_AbregoCh 2 Chapter 2