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I like the story, its wholesome. MC and FL chemistry is good too, a gentle kind physician and a tyrant empress
bro the potential of these fic if you add them especially the manga ones, people's mind will break and they will love it
there's soooo many normal world anime villain out there, so many that could destroy and break the mc without even breaking a sweat
there, i put the reason why people drop this book. oh another thing many did that thing and they were approved because their work is not on normal world(i think you said many times that its really an ordinary world correct me if im wrong). And the way you did it is not very good, like you just suddenly put him there out of nowhere, "you also see a floating screen didn't you"(something like that i forgot)
you know what you did wrong? you just suddenly put the 2nd reincarnator there, you also said that it's an ordinary world it's not about being scared that mc have a challenge or someone might steal his girls its about the poor placement, you should have written him in early chapters or about the potential other reincarnators. Because people are okay with story with many reincarnators and mc purge them or mc goes to another worlds and purge these reincarnators(I've read hundreds of these stories, yes its mtl). you also should have put a warning that you'll add them later on and you said that its an ORDINARY WORLD, if you want mc to have a challenge theres so many anime villain there, make them as evil as you want as powerful(politically and financially) as you want. besides mc doesn't have a magical power or op power so these villains even from normal world is enough for the mc, their even over the top for the current mc did you get it?
they are useful tho, so what now only abilities that make you stronger is important? you sound like a reasonable person there but you really don't know what you're talking about
you don't know common sense? you solve it based on what breath comes next: 1x8= 8, 8+7= 15, 15-2= 13, 13+10= 23, 23x4= 92 this is how it works, you don't use pemdas on it because how can you do it on a breathing, it doesn't predict the future of what breath are you going to do next, because if it does it should predict your very last breath before you die, your current breath to that last breath. get it? use common sense well let's say the breath that counts are the breaths when you use breathing technique, that's still not how it works buddy
PEAK FICTION, The best Demon Slayer ff of all👏👏👏 Its even one of the best ff of all, that's how good it is. The story is top tier, you won't get bored while reading it. The action scenes are very good. The waifus are 🥰 you'll get diabetes. The relationship is not forced and the bromance is the best. The Mc and his character development is 🤌, you will love him he will grow into you, he's not edgy not arrogant not annoying. He's pervy a lil bit and have a good sense of humor. He's deaf and talented too. The writing is immaculate, the pacing is good. Author-san also updates daily and many chapters in one day. The world background is good, there's no other power system mixed in, just pure Demon Slayer. What can i say more just read it you won't regret it.