I appreciate your review and as for the it being to fast and the randomness of it I am still quite new to this on a lot of aspects but I hope you have a nice day nevertheless and hope you will read it again soon.

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I will try and do more character development in future chapters this is also my first novel so i am slightly struggling on what to put in the chapters.

You will find out in future chapters

https://discord.gg/3cMCDG8H This invite is only good for today before it is not good to use anymore I will be stuck with an exam for today so I won't be on it for now.

Actually I might have found a better alternative if you want discord would be better I can allow you to copy and paste my work and edit on another platform then after you edit it you could put the edited version for me to put into the chapter that way it's both easy and efficient.

Although it would be nice I usually stay up trying to fix them so it would make my day a lot better if someone did but I have no idea at all on how to get an editor.

Thank you for your review 😊

I'm working on this alone I never really thought of getting someone to edit for me

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If you would like I could edit it when I have the time?

I might have time to edit it because currently i am swamped with work I could find time in between a few breaks to do it.

I'm glad to know you enjoy it english is not my first language so I have been using a translator most of the time if you could give me where there are mistakes I would be grateful.

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I overall love this novel the writings good I'll look forward to future chapters 😃 . . . .