The story has a lot of potential. The writing quality is quite good, just a few errors here and there. I however have a problem with the amount or how the dialogue tags are used. It disturbs the readers imaginative process... I can feel the presence of the author.. Good world background and good charcter design Overall I do recommend the book❤️

Really liked the story, felt like I was living the story with the characters!!! It's an honest must read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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I've been a fan of the book for a while and I must say, one of the best books I've read. I highly recommend the book to anyone, do check it out!

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I've been following the book for a while and I must say, it's amazing! I'm obsessed, I love love loveeee the protagonist. besides a few minor grammatical errors, I've enjoyed every bit of it, every description every word. I hope you give it a read cause u have to! you won't regret it. something you can't pass by!

I genuinely enjoyed reading the book for the past week and would highly recommend it to anyone! it just traps you instant and you're stuck in the amazing world with the protagonist who's strong...and amazing 🤭 Romance.... cliffhangers. I love!

beautiful story line, it just perfection. this work deserves much attention 😊[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

this was really an interesting chapter. I love the story [img=update]

I have to admit that the storyline is my favourite part about this book, I immediately was hooked and couldn't stop reading each chapter. I can't want for more 🤗

I dare not to deny that the story is very interesting I really enjoyed reading through the first part, definitely should be added to the library, I love the story 😊

I think this isn't he first fantasy work I've read since forever and I have no regrets, the book is amazing. I enjoyed the storyline, and the world background drew me in immediately. the only thing I wish for is a decent updating scedual as hooked as we are we need more then 2 chapters a week. overall loving the work

as soon as I read the first chapter I couldn't stop scrolling, the book is amazing! the storyline is what caught my attention, I am officially a fan of the author. [img=fp][img=fp] the writing quality is good, with an awesome storyline. the character design, beyond description. the character design is amazing as well, I am a fan of the protagonist, I could only imagine how I would react if I were him...and lastly my favourite part the world background. descriptive and captivating! can't wait to read more

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the story is well written and extremely amazing. I enjoyed reading every bit of it, the world background for me was the best. it was very descriptive and engages the reader very well. I'm glad to have come across such a good piece of work 🥺💜can't wait for more

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I've been following the story for a while and I have to say that it us very enjoyable ...it grabs the readers attention instantly and gets one hooked. I recommend it, you have yo try it! the only thing I'm sad about is the update stability which I hope improves because we need more!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]