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Thank you author! it's so refreshing to read your story.

Thanks for the new chapter! ❤️

I definitely feel the half and half. I just loved the line at the end 😂

The dad is funny 😂 Love it!

I Am very excited for this story! the flow is great and it's easy to imagine the scenes. it is hard to find Yakuza stories and it's not riddled with grammatical errors. 😊

After chapter 40, the editing goes downhill pretty quickly. Amazing story!!! But it is distracting when he/she is mixed up as well as no punctuation is used anymore. I would love to help edit it as this book is more along the lines of a work of literature.

It is a great story. I feel the same feeling I used to get when I would read stories of King Camelot. A total escape and fun to read.

I Agree as well! it is definitely a hidden gem. I love the books on here but this is a breath of exciting, adventurous air. Arthur, keep up the good work. ❤️

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I Want more!!! this is mob style that is so hard to find!!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭