Melissa_Merritt_6065

really not a fan of her brother, this better be a test of some kind. who she is with is up to her

I really enjoyed it and hope to read more.

I really enjoyed the story and want to read more but it looks like maybe the author has stopped updating. i wish there was a way to know when it would start back up.

Over all I am really liking the stiry and it development but I am annoyed that chapters 215 to 220 are just a repeat of the very first few chapters exactly the same with no added info. Chapters cost too much to be doing full flash backs of previous chapters, just tell me to reread those chapters and then go back to cutrent chapter if the flash back is gonna add nothing to furthering the story.

Very well written story, it leaves me wishing I could taste their food and smell what they smell and see what they see. The descriptions just make it feel so real while reading. Some of the cattiness of the women in the begining was super annoying like OMG you have 20 plus mates why you hung up on trying to kill the girl who has 2 because you can't have them now and she is prettier than you. None of these girls have ever been called ugly, I get why Bao would think it but the other girls have always been treated like they hung the moon and stars. I really love how the characters grow over the course of the story. I hated Parker at first and was so upset with Muir when he tried to kill Curtis but now they are kind of sweet hearts to Bai. Curtis and Winston are better mates for Bai, they just want her safe and happy and if that means they need to be stronger then thats what they will do. Bai's personality is a bit blah to me, she is nice but why did she lie and say she was ape tribe at the very begining. I don't get it. She didn't know that humans didn't exsist on the planet. Obviously finding a shape shifting leopard is shocking and I get the fear of being eaten but leopards will eat apes too. That didn't make her amy safer from being dinner.