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where is the sister died ???

The sister died or what ... she is the most striking character and you erase it, seriously what happens to you ... but it says that she died but you do not disappear 5 days without sleeping the main character, maybe sister nop was there to help him how ridiculous of

The title is very good, it is striking and interesting, give them a chance to read it the synopsis and the title make you want to read and know what will happen but nothing else As soon as you read and I keep reading, I realize that the story becomes increasingly boring ... "All the supposed villains" are in love with the protagonist and I think that since he was born, they are all melossas and it is cold when the protagonist is not there all the same There is nothing interesting, I thought there would be repercussions that there would be serious discussions and maybe a fight for being villains, but no It looks like a Disney story, looking frank even a Disney story is more serious and interesting with interesting villains here you only put title antagonist Here none is noted as antagonists, they only see themselves as very overprotective women with the protagonist nothing more show some antagonism, don't put a very good title with a honeyed story that looks more like a honeyed story of love and possession shows a great battle between the main character and the female servants, the supposed antagonists because if not, it was better that you put the title, "I fall in love with antagonistic women" or something like that because here if women are antagonists the protagonist is also ... unless you show something forceful to change them But you started badly ... and all those maids are madly in love or possessive of the protagonist ... if it were the opposite, it would be seen how the protagonist changes his women to be a little more tolerant, of course if they were true antagonists. Here they all obey as if they were submissive women or they already are, which bores me ... no matter what happens, they will protect you for some simple reason. and since the protagonist looks like a virgin otaku, he doesn't think cliches of characters like that there are lots of them With the premise of the title, the synopsis had high expectations, however I was disappointed, my fault for thinking that there was an author with an original work and not with the typical character cliché

el titulo esta muy bueno es llamativo e interezante,dan gans de leerlo la sinopsis y el titulo dan ganas de lleer y saber que sucedera pero nada mas ni bien lees y sigueo leeyendo me doy cuenta que la historia se torna cada ves mas aburrida... "todas las supuestas villanas" estan enamoradas del prota y creo que desde que nacio,todas son melossas y sde hacen las frias cuando no esta el prota todos lo mismo no hay nada de interezante,pense que habria repercuciones que habria discuciones serias y talves una plelea por ser villanas,pero no parece una historia de Disney, parecer franco hasta una historia de Disney es mas serio e interesante con villanos interezantes aquí solo pusiste antagonista de titulo aqui ninguna se hace notar como antagonmista.solo se ven como unas mujeres muy sobreprotectoras con el prota nada mas muestra algo de antagonismo, no pongas un titulo muy bueno con historia melosa que mas parece una historia melosa de amor y posesión muestra una gran batalla entre el prota y las mujeres sirvientas,las supuestas antagonistas por que sino ,era mejor que pongas el titulo, de " me enamoro de mujeres antagonistas " o algo por el estilo por que aqui si las mujeres son antagonistas el prota tambien lo es....a menos que muestras algo contundente para cambiarlas pero empezaste mal....ya todas esas sirvientas están locamente enamoradas o posesivas del prota...si fuera lo contrario se vería como el prota cambia a sus mujeres para ser un poco mas tolerantes, claro si es que fueran antagonistas de verdad. aca ya todas obedecen como si fueran mujeres sumisas o ya lo son, lo que me aburre ..no importe lo que pase ellas lo protegerán por alguna razón simple. y como el protagonista parece un virgen otaku,no piensa cliches de personajes asi hay a montones con la premisa del titulo la sinopsis tenia altas expectativas, sin embargo me lleve una decepciones culpa mia por pensar que había un autor con una obra original y no con el típico cliché de personaje

the writing is fine, the explanation of the world too but to be honest your protagonist is really stupid, he believes the first thing they say to him also brings the zombies to work to beat them up, All this was quickly solved by giving a few coins or the company would take over easily, because the company is not his. but he does not say that he has everything planned and calculated, he boycotts himself when he sees that he brings beings that do not have identities and that a few drops of their blood could cause an infection and well you know what would happen next ... why did you say that this restricted, but that's if it doesn't bite or bleeds and infects others another world just like where it goes I like that he was ambitious, but protagonists who think they are smart and intelligent I like them, but if they say to themselves intelligent and they are not, they do more nonsense ... I don't know if you wanted to make it look funny or what, but that doesn't make sense. as a saying goes, it starts well and declines as the story goes this looks like a cliché of a chinese character

the writing is fine, the explanation of the world too but to be honest your protagonist is really stupid, he believes the first thing they say to him also brings the zombies to work to beat them up, All this was quickly solved by giving a few coins or the company would take over easily, because the company is not his. but he does not say that he has everything planned and calculated, he boycotts himself when he sees that he brings beings that do not have identities and that a few drops of their blood could cause an infection and well you know what would happen next ... why did you say that this restricted, but that's if it doesn't bite or bleeds and infects others another world just like where it goes I like that he was ambitious, but protagonists who think they are smart and intelligent I like them, but if they say to themselves intelligent and they are not, they do more nonsense ... I don't know if you wanted to make it look funny or what, but that doesn't make sense. as a saying goes, it starts well and declines as the story goes this looks like a cliché of a chinese character

this novel seemed interesting to me, I see it potential, well or that I thought but unfortunately this protagonist is worse than other protas the because it is simple, the best character that there was in history, you erased it as if it never existed, the protagonist is forgotten by the person who helps the fastest worried or concern, did not care if what you see in all caps that I read And I mean the young lady of the beginning of the novel He did all up to prostitute himself to protect him and save him.A great love than Mo Tien price and more in those difficult moments However, the prota does not worry or seek her, having the system in the body of him that he said he could hack the government himself, it did not cost him anything to look for her by the networks. The protagonist and days were very much known , as you can or remember it, what kind of human being is the protagonist Wait for M, Uchos Caps to look for him or who at least will contact her and tell her what was coming and told her that she was going to happen in the near future to protect himself Wait at least one call or concern for the woman who helped him, who protected him for a long time but nothing happens, your character with that way of being, is someone who knows how to pay goodness with kindness and evil with evil, because of the woman was surely someone cruel and vile PD. Even bad are remembered.

this novel seemed interesting to me, I see it potential, well or that I thought but unfortunately this protagonist is worse than other protas the because it is simple, the best character that there was in history, you erased it as if it never existed, the protagonist is forgotten by the person who helps the fastest worried or concern, did not care if what you see in all caps that I read And I mean the young lady of the beginning of the novel He did all up to prostitute himself to protect him and save him.A great love than Mo Tien price and more in those difficult moments However, the prota does not worry or seek her, having the system in the body of him that he said he could hack the government himself, it did not cost him anything to look for her by the networks. The protagonist and days were very much known , as you can or remember it, what kind of human being is the protagonist Wait for M, Uchos Caps to look for him or who at least will contact her and tell her what was coming and told her that she was going to happen in the near future to protect himself Wait at least one call or concern for the woman who helped him, who protected him for a long time but nothing happens, your character with that way of being, is someone who knows how to pay goodness with kindness and evil with evil, because of the woman was surely someone cruel and vile PD. Even bad are remembered.

this novel seemed interesting to me, I see it potential, well or that I thought but unfortunately this protagonist is worse than other protas the because it is simple, the best character that there was in history, you erased it as if it never existed, the protagonist is forgotten by the person who helps the fastest worried or concern, did not care if what you see in all caps that I read And I mean the young lady of the beginning of the novel He did all up to prostitute himself to protect him and save him.A great love than Mo Tien price and more in those difficult moments However, the prota does not worry or seek her, having the system in the body of him that he said he could hack the government himself, it did not cost him anything to look for her by the networks. The protagonist and days were very much known , as you can or remember it, what kind of human being is the protagonist Wait for M, Uchos Caps to look for him or who at least will contact her and tell her what was coming and told her that she was going to happen in the near future to protect himself Wait at least one call or concern for the woman who helped him, who protected him for a long time but nothing happens, your character with that way of being, is someone who knows how to pay goodness with kindness and evil with evil, because of the woman was surely someone cruel and vile PD. Even bad are remembered.