Gnossienne_N

Great start but as soon as the MC gets a little stronger he becomes a douche, makes a ****ton of dumb choices that always work out fine for him, master the elements in days and goes against aang 'cause otherwise the story would be done already since he's too OP. Not really a story, just a character exploiting whatever it can for no reason at all.

I wanted to like this but I've never cared for star wars. My only real complain would be the over explanation of ships, weapons, and similar stuff. I don't know shit about the material used. I don't know shit about HOW they build ships. I don't know shit about ship classes, etc So all those lengthy explanations just didn't do it for me. It reminded me of a harry potter self insert that was 90% the MC describing his guns and cars.

This is probably the best pokemon SI that I've read so far. But! I don't want romance in it! There's already too much fucking romance in pokemon fics already

I'll ignore the obvious OP wand, uber easy to get house elves, ultra SS rare bloodlines and friendly goblins. Waking up at 3am? I think that's just dumb or simply wrong. I got bored of the focus on boring ass druella and the whole 'save the houses' Just met this girl on the train, skip scene and now she's the new BFF for no good reason. 'I just met this dude so now I'll deal with bulling and blood purist in general 'cause? I talked to him for a bit? ' Dumb. Also tom: I got a shitload of thing to do but I better spend my first day in school waking up at 3am to train this unimportant girl. TLDR> way too many cliches, OP MC turns into an idiot whenever he's around kids