MadFool

A promising start. Events so far have been fast paced yet thrilling all the same. MC is relatable, an orphan down on his luck with dreams of awakening. When it finally happens, his life starts to turn around for the better. Not much have been told about the betrayal he experienced in the first chapter but author has nicely fleshed out his relationship with his team and guildmates. Looking forwards to what future chapters bring. While this is a new fanfic the updates have been so far consistant and the writing quality is above average compared to what you typically find on this site.

The original is much older than Master of Tactics. The author of Master of Tactics even said in his own synopsis that the two may look similiar in the start.

This killed me.😂

Firstborn son but not firstborn.

Yeah for sure, ”for the greater good” Mc that is ”nice person”.

After the rebellion Renly was only 5-7 years old…

So far so good. The MC has a "transmigration benefit" that does not completely break the power balance of ASOIAF world. Mc is relatively smart and ruthless, but has clear boundaries that he doesn't cross. Start has been promising so I hope the quality doesn't drop but so far plot hasn't progressed much so it's too early to tell.

You lost me at the point when he told Coulson and SHIELD that "an organization in Himalayas said he is the chosen one and only he can save the world" bs. Too cringey for me and such a lame excuse about a savior would never fly with a secret organization like SHIELD.

The MC is recklessand contradictory making the few dozen chapters a pain to read. The side characters feel very superficial and illogical, especially in the beginning the interaction between the MC and Knowledge Keepers was awkward and honestly stupid; they could have easily followed the Mc back and looted the house and artifact since Mc spilled that the one person that could act as a deterrence had already left. The pathway is a mess and the fact you need rituals to advance in every sequence just to make the already original pathway more special feels redundant. The fact Mc didn’t ”transmigrate” alone and isn’t the only one in the same Old One pathway is also a minus for me, some may like it but lets face it LoM is filled with eldritch beings that can be used as further antagonists and you really don’t need to pull some fellow worker that was in the same company from your a** to make it more appealing. Writing quality is readable but nothing amazing and same is for style. Updating seems to be quite stable, as for world building, well it is LoM so it can’t be too bad.

Sengoku and Garp both have Conqueror's and they are fine. Just because a kid has Conqueror's doesn't mean they will instantly kill him, it would most likely depend on his ambition.