Damn! that is great, I am enjoying it. Keep up the excellent work.

Great Novel! This story is great. The start was strong and also the author got a good sense of words. I recommend this story because it is intriguing. It also flows at a steady pace. I am looking forward to more.

Oh, I just realized that you were talking about these chapters, I had some problems as they were gone and had to rewrite them. The story will pick back up soon, so don't worry.

Thank you very much, appreciate it, you are a great writer with an amazingly entertaining story, means a lot to hear this from you :)

No, he has not.

I get you, some of them will be more like background/supporting character appearing occasionally, others will dominate more. The gradual addition will happen when I write the next book :)

Thank you, I actually appreciate your comment, the specific points help me pinpoint where I can improve and now I have a more clear goal.

Thanks

Thanks, fixed it :)

tnx, fixed it :)

Thanks, will fix it :)

This will be true much-much later in the story :)

True-true-true! :)

Thanks, I will be taking your advice and will try to improve them :)

Thank you!

Thank you!

Welcome back!

Just 1 week. I am very busy IRL.

Well, that is how it might seem in the beginning, but as the story progress, so do their relationship and there is emotional build-up. Hope this helps!

I am not sure what you mean. But if it helps, romance, harem along and with a few more tags remain central elements in the story.