black*

that*

Now, that's an insult to Kakashi's abilities if I have ever seen one.

Noice

You've got to fix that grammar brother

either external or internal

what is this for?

1 - Croygel, although i almost picked number 2 cz i'm brazilian.

waste*

lava*

Don't worry about it.

sigh*

again...

I don't think there is a need to be putting these kind of comments in the story, it breaks the immersion.

I feel like that Lol thing in the beginning was kinda weird but ok.

That would definitely be a good feature for the exact reasons that you mentioned, i think there is an option to kinda make both of them, he can go back all the way or have the quick save, but the quick save is an option that he unlocks after he achieves certain level of power you know. Just an idea tho.

Obviously this is a very small error, but just for aesthetics sake, the price is *3020*.

Window*

hohoho

Thaanks