Marfu_Mausul

firstly sorry if the wording is wrong or whatever, but I agree with some of the comments as fanfiction which in fact is always AU there is not much difference at the character level and almost exactly the same as the original character. This is surprising considering he is a reincarnation even though he didn't read 'Harry Potter' thoroughly but his previous personality definitely stuck and it disappeared in later stages I understand it can be called character development but why does it feel like he doesn't get better but instead follows Conan himself, those of you who read the original book will know how he behaves James Potter, honestly I don't like him especially the prank session with snap, it wasn't a prank or a joke but the insults, oppression, bullying that I see, I hope he's not like that because it destroys all his stories. Thank You

somehow I see him as a slave to fate, I mean he keeps talking about going against his own fate but because of that it also feels like he's easy to manipulate, too obsessed with destiny

you know the nerf is really okay, you should read fanfic fate dxd Which nerf is really extraordinary, you know that right? What do I mean

At first it was interesting with a concept like that and the choice of reincarnation which was very interesting but unfortunately the execution was really lacking, it's like reading Chinese fanfiction

Ahhhh.....why!!!!!.....huhu I'm looking forward to the next chapter

I don't want to explain it or anything, but yeah, political issues like this aren't for me, so I think this chapter is a bit unsatisfying, don't judge Okay, I'm not saying this chapter is ruined, bad, or anything, it's just not satisfying for me, but I still appreciate it maybe for the progress of the story or not

to be honest, for this chapter I don't like it a bit but it's still good....enthusiasm, friend Thanks for the chapter

I'm still waiting for progress

I don't really understand why mc doesn't increase his yin or yang attributes, it provides greater benefits than the others, attributes that in the Naruto series are related to the body can definitely strengthen the body or can get to the sage body like Hashirama or Ashura, the yin attribute can definitely increase the sharinggan because almost all doujutsu depend on the yin attribute, just like genjutsu which is dominated by the yin attribute, if it is possible to combine them to form a yin-yang attribute, it will definitely give mc a slight increase let alone the yin-yang attribute can create even life

yes, it's a very good choice for mastering runes, there are many ways to use runes and I still hope that she will practice her occomulancy seriously if she continues to worry about her mind being attacked continuously.