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great potential; the story has to be one of the best on this site. The author is a beginner but writes very well. Of course, if you search, you will find some errors or inconsistencies, but the story and the characters have great potential. I particularly like the Fuiinjustsu part. For me, the author could perhaps improve the characters reactions part because people's reactions are as if he were a genius and only think, Ok. Sincere author, don't give up on this; lots of potential.

do you post the fanfics in ay other site ? i want to read the house of dragon fic... the one that webnovel deleted

so webnovel delete the fanfic about got... do you have this in any other site ?

very good, the concept about fuinjutsu have a lot of potential and i trust in this autor to explore that. please dont drop.

this have potential, great to just read and relax, but if you is a reader that will be angry with any detail this novel is not for you. good points: magic system of skyrim direct to the point no have many grammar mistakes is game of thrones based but does not have a lot of politics or betrayals bad points: the author do not think a lot in the history, like kids of 3 years being a teacher magic to another 3 year kid many acts dosent have any response final: is a good novel, not the best but you can read to kill time or relax, many other novel do worse than that but have more stars so take a seat and read the firsts chapter before make a critic.

Some kingdom building novels or have kingdom building elements. - Swiss Arms Reborn and found the swiss - The rise of australasia Reborn as one of prince of england and after become the king of australia - The first Vampire Reborn in a fantasy world become the first vampire, have a lot of political plots. - Holy Roman Empire Reborn in 1800 and be the king of austria. - Three of Aeons Reborn like a tree in a fantasy world and with time construct a empire to fight against demoniac invasion. - Mediterranean Hegemon of Ancient Greece Reborn in ancient greece, create a nation fight against siracusa and rome. - Scholar's Advanced Technological System Read this only if you dont care for nacionalism, is about a man that make new discovery and tecnology with a system ( the system only give some missions and buff his inteligence) - The Dungeon Without System Reborn like a dungeon core and build a dungeon, no system only the core make dungeons things.

i already see this fic in this site but the old TL abandoned. please dont give up, this is a good one.

Green points probaly is NTR, in chine they use the expression put a green hat for this kind of thing.

Please, dont drop this, at least give a good end. And if you will write another novel i susgest a kindong Building with fantasy elements, we have small amount of novels with good quality of this theme.

please dont drop this, the novel concept is new, and the write quality is pretty good.