RuthFish
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RuthFish5dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 54 being noble- RuthFish5dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 54 being noble
- RuthFish5dตอบกลับถึง OLD_storage
We need to get the gender words correct. Please use 'he' and 'him' or 'she' and 'her' for male and female respectively. Otherwise it may confuse readers. The story is great so far, keep it up!
Lina was the maid who served Shizune until she was five years old. While Lina was taking my body measurements, I learned a lot about Shizune's likes and dislikes. Judging by her appearance, she was probably around 8-10 years old. I secretly prayed for him to have to serve a slut like Shizune at such a young age - RuthFish1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Learning was achieved on this day 🤣
"We will do it ourselves this time." Sylvia cut Mika off. - RuthFish2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
this is confusing to read ngl. The flow is going everywhere and it seems things jump around. If I were you, I would build up a plot point (event / arc 1), expand on it, then add in future plot points as foreshadowing (events 2,34...) while still focusing on the initial plot (event /arc 1) point you're expanding on.
Ch 38 The Turning Point [3]{Edited} - RuthFish2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I first read this as "in a sugary lab". I'm like, is this candy land? I'm tired.
In a Surgery Lab... - RuthFish3mthตอบกลับถึง zqteoCh 429 147. Nesting Dolls Together
- RuthFish3mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I transcended.
"Because then it'd be a foot." - RuthFish5mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
he's 12.
'Interesting kid.' Her eyes lingered on Azzy for a couple of seconds before she deactivated the effect. - RuthFish5mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
or an incredibly short elliptical orbit
The sun would have to be orbiting the planet! - RuthFish5mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I didnt realize that the author's comment could have that much text. Didn't even know you could tap to expand it till now. Thanks and keep up the great work!
//Author's warning regarding the doubts/worries I'm starting to see in the comments: Go and check out the author's notes cuz I don't want to spam it here. It's a message on the longer side but should dispel most of your worries//detailRiches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!แฟนตาซี · MotivatedSloth - RuthFish9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I wish readers would stop telling the authors how to write. They are doing amazing.
"Goddammit!" - RuthFish10mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Maidenless
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - RuthFish10mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Ah yes, about 200 of these potatoes worth of iron. Anything but the metric system.
"Oh, that's close to half a Kilogram, so you need about a hundred Kilograms?" - RuthFish10mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Toga?
The clothes I wore, no, robe. Was a pale blue... dress? I have no idea what they call these, it looked like a bathrobe only it was made of silk. - RuthFish10mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Finally, a Chad MC who sticks to his guns. I approve.
"Fuck you." - RuthFish10mthตอบกลับถึง MrsLeeMauSue
This one officer!
Half an hour later however, Xiao Lin reached the entrance of the hotel where the merchant group was staying. Upon turning around, he smiled bitterly when he saw that the little girl had been following him, though she did so while deliberately keeping a certain distance. - RuthFish11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
literally two minds fighting for third place.
The snobby blonde went back to her friend group with a much better-behaved Goblin while Wolfe tried not to laugh. They were both idiots, and he wondered which one would win the battle of wits. - RuthFish11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
username checks out.
#Wetgirl: So handsome… I am already wet…