Henil_Patel_6069

its confusing whether chakra is shred or misubi. this whole new powers and chakra and breathing techniques is heating annoying as there no particular power syatem shown here. its all jumbled up

so je did not share Misubi but chakra to koreko as it was mentioned earlier other it would not make sense if chakra and misubi is different

well this is only on early few ch later it get worse. I don't exactly remeber the actual dxd plot but on that fallen angels are there for aisha to steal her sacred gears and issei was killed because they found that he also had sacred gers and killed his so he is not threat to other fallens of their group, but here the author changed that to issei being their main target and aisha not being there. I wouldn't mind the change but author didn't mention it being AU so that irritated me quite bit. there is also some other thing that's irritating like sharingan/chakra he has is not his cheat but amateurish created by watching anime so I thing author might give other powers to other original characters that different then cannon which I think is just bullshit and that also annoying to read.

read till ch 15 but so far everything is really chaotic and scenes changes suddenly for example he was talking to saito and zero, and suddenly scene changes. even power he i setting is confusing as this AU mixed universe has differ kind of powers. sometimes author showed that in combat training he got future knowledge but he does not give wht knowledge he got at the a time but will say it in future chapters which makes is less coordinated, less interesting and more frustrating for readers to connect with the novel. as mentioned in synopsis after ch 15 it will be danmachi so, will give this novel a chance for few more chs hoping for some improvement.

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Reviewing after 29 ch so don't know if there is any improvement but si far what I read, I was disappointed with some scenes. for example, MC has mental breakdown for his first kill he did for self defense, reason given that he was from earth he was not used to it. like even in earth I have seen many cases where in self defense someone killed other party but they don't seem to have that much mental impact as author described. 2nd thing is where he saves wolf's, reason same as he is from earth and he is kind and animal lover so he will save the wolf's from bear and for that he killed the bear so for killing bear he didn't remeber that he was animal lover and I think this was hypocrite of MC. MC use of appraisal skill is very low i have only seen him use that 2 when the animal were injured to check their HP so that is also low point as he goes to trouble without checking what he is getting into like with street fight to save the girl. Xiao yue has lot of mood swing where the affection point fluctuate for slightest matter and some of them i think is silly. MC is also in love with her within 2 days there is no development between them and directly sex which is also minus point. In the end I was just disappointed with MC character as so far it doesn't seem be stable. All this is my opinion till ch 29 so can not say much how it will develop but good luck to author.

thank you bro the same thing bothered me as well and on top of that the guy did not save his 2nd life parents even after staying with them for 5 years and tried to save Mavis despite knowing that she will be safe. the reason for saving author says that ot is because Mavis reminds him of his past family like bro you have 2nd parents in 2nd life alive and baces on what is described they treated him nicely.if author wanted to just kill the parents then do it before mc have some power or possibly of saving them or portray them as unloving parents otherwise it leaves bad taste on readers like me. just my person opinion.

good writing quality. story development is also good but there are some plot mistakes, like for example sinister six were captured and were imprisoned in magic prison but after few chapters there were some member of sinister six loose on the street and dr octopus also killed Gwen's father. I am not sure if author explained on how sinister six got free from magic prison as I listen to the book while working so it could be possible that somehow they were set free but to me it does not make any sense as none sinister six can do magic so how they escaped. author has romance tag but I havens seen any romance since ch 50 so far. there was one date with Natasha but after that author have not made any progress. so until ch 50 I liked the novel somewhat but it was getting boring personally for me as the MC is somewhat beta MC and is not telling anyone that he knows something about future(can say that he can somewhat know little future to avoide other heros suspicion) but no our MC doesn't do that and always behaves as sidekick of the other heros. so all of this is my opinion so Atleast give this fanfic some try as some of other readers might like it. Good luck to the author.

🤣😅😅 valid point bro it also.got.me there to but I was like fu*k it its fanfic anyways

isn't the doctor strange the leader of this gang