Kevin_Valentin

Well...at least your honest

Stories don't always need romance you don't need to try and shoehorn it in.To me Winston seems more like a one piece character in that he has friends that are as close as family but he doesn't necessarily need romantic love because he loves the journey way more

Man how is this not more popular loving the story the beginning did feel a bit too much like the actual game but I'm liking the mc insight it changes up the story more than most would think.

Ok without a doubt most hype chapter you've written that speech in the end *chefs kiss*

This gets a 5 from me you've done an excellent job translating especially since I've checked out the raws and they're real bad to the point that I read one paragraph and was like this does not translate well I noped out of there so fast. My only Complaint is i read 100 chapters in a day now I have to wait for more so I can binge read them again.

I didn't expect that but I feel like I should've

Wait so he just has a kid now? Really random wasn't expecting it. He really never mentioned wanting children, and it's a big responsibility. especially since he's having one with a person he hardly knows. I assume he'll be like Solomon then and have a veritable army of children

It's not a one piece story without a jailbreak from Impel Down

Ok well I I actually prefer no romance like at all I don't get why stories even need it in the first place realistically I don't see any relationship working and I don't feel it fits with how the story is going

I kinda wish he got a different name befitting of his future status not that his name is bad it's just a strange name for a slime it would be nice if he got a unique name and Aiden would be the name he prefers if he has a close relationship to whomever he is speaking to