CockroaChan

All of the point you give sums up all of the webnovel author type of writing. Im not criticizing webnovel authors it’s just compare to korean or japanese authors they tend to make small mistakes for fast update which I really hate bc small mistakes may be stacked up into a big mistake in the future.

Why make a system novel when you can’t even keep up with the system like be better bro

Where’s the apocalypse baby effect on the previous lvl up and skill?

Yea. Kinda infuriating with MC arrogant attitude when he know he’s weak. Yeah I’m not asking to beg but at least try not to provoke more. Then he ask why others treat him like that also, duhh its his attitude bro. And the fact that he didn’t do any research about the system for fking 17 chap even as the hunger’s percentage goes up is crazy bro. Mc have the system tell him that he will lose control above certain threshold but nahh MC just be doing “look at me I don’t know what the system mean so I’m just gonna ignore those warning and do nothing all day🙂”

17 chapters for 1 day bruh. 100 chap and what a week?

Naaahhhh… Imagine deciding to be an author especially on English readers but don’t know even the basic of the language

Deleting comments?

You’re the one with the bad grammar buddy. I doubt you can even understand any novel no matter how great the grammar is. Btw its MTL not MPL lil bro.

Just nuke with magic? You can make the MC nuke monster with spamming magic but here he can’t? What bullshit writing is this?

Bro the concept is good even the story pace is good but the author destroyed it by trying to make everyone around MC is OP. Hell author even forgot about all the side characters. Where the hell is ritchie,Melina,Armstrong and other player on the Skyline Continent? Author forget he spoonfed MC with information but then forgot he already spoonfed MC with that info and tell MC again. Dialogue of the story is bland further into the novel. Even the smut scene author use the same word for every woman MC have s*x with. And whats the point of game system when you don’t even show the game status like wtf? I have waaaay more thing im dissatisfied with but this is all the main problems others only some minor problem.