EMIYA

I find the scenarios where a Toaru esper is inserted into another environment interesting. I was reading a Metal Out story, after having read a fanfic of a Toaru insert by Misaki and seeing that it was a very operational ability. It was a mental out in MHA. The author abandoned the story.

Seiji lost his mark after killing Doma

The truth is that I don't really like that kind of interpretation of the demons of DXD, trying to differentiate them so much from humanity, for me they are just another kind of branch of humanity. They are partly human since Lilith's flesh was used when Lucifer was creating them with the help of his book, and they are capable of feeling the same things that humans feel, I think what separates them the most would be the scope of age and time.

leí tu anterior historia por lo que se que escribes bien, lo único negativo que he observado hasta ahora con tu historia seria la falta de interacción de personajes, por ejemplo, el protagonista se reúne con otro personaje, escribes un párrafo de interacción y luego agregas al siguiente "siguieron hablando de ciertas cosas tal y tal" así que es mas contar que mostrar. I read your previous story so I know you write well, the only negative thing I've noticed so far with your story would be the lack of character interaction, for example, the protagonist meets another character, you write a paragraph of interaction and then add to the next "they continued talking about certain things such and such" so it's more telling than showing.

I think the protagonist should learn about medicine, his eyes would be of great help.

Hi author, check out what came out in the last chapter of komi_san

The author is publishing a story of a Megumi if in the Questing Questing forum, his username is Evans

muy buena historia, me encanto, lo leí todo en un estado de frenesí lectoral..... buena historia, sigue así hermano, tu historia de demon slayer también esta entretenida. por cierto, léete el manga de komisan