He(John) should've just left... I mean what was the point of all that. At least he would have been more mysterious. But great chap👍

I have to say, I did NOT expect it to be so GOOD. I mean, I have read a lot of Marvel fan-fics and, I have to say, none of them compare to this.[img=update] But alas, I think the author dropped it.

No no no Mr Author I'm sorry but you are not doing any of these characters justice😞 nevermind Tobirama and Hashirama,but MADARA? Madara would never ever ever ever beg and I mean NEVER

Cool

My bad😅 I meant can

It may be a bit embarrasing to say but it hasn't been that long since I've discovered fanfics but it's not a short time either and I can't honestly say that this is one of the best fan-fics I've read so far.