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Big fan of a lot of shonen anime. I love the isekai concept. I dislike harem stories that are forced. I really hate SUPER OP MCS a majority of the time, not all the time but most of the time.
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Gabe_1mthตอบกลับถึง WereWolf1987ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว- Gabe_2mthตอบกลับถึง ChaddtsCh 1 1. Awakening
- Gabe_7mthตอบกลับถึง Danna_3256
With just Brook not much character development can happen but I see your point thanks for the comment
"Just you wait Moria We're coming for you! and I will get payback!" screamed Arthur at the top of his lungs well not that he has lungs to scream with. - Gabe_11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 31 Hey folks
- Gabe_11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 30 Chapter 28: Trunks Empire
- Gabe_1yrตอบกลับถึง Gabe_Ch 28 Hi folks
- Gabe_1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think this story is one of the most well written DBZ fanfics on the platform period. You are very detailed and descriptive keeping track of the butterfly effect you’ve put in place had been the most entertaining forsure smoll Oda vibes. The transformations and techniques are super cool in my opinion and it feels well paced. I think you have a banger of a novel here author and I’d love to see as much GT stuff as you can slip in and the movies too intact all the additional stuff coming into play movies, spin-offs, games like the ex fusion band or whatever from the fusions game that’d be sick anyways sorry for the unhinged verbal diarrhea SCAR VS ARALE
Ch 28 Hi folks - Gabe_1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 38 Base Raid
- Gabe_3yrตอบกลับถึง ShenglizhenCh 5 05 The First Raid... Continued!
- Gabe_3yrตอบกลับถึง Daoist629680Ch 4 04 Training Log
- Gabe_3yrตอบกลับถึง Seek_the_Truth
I think I also might have read that in the wrong context. Did you mean I ****ed the OG Story or my fanfic is ****ed?😅
Arthur came clean. He told Brook every last detail, Multiverse Theory, his past life, the butterfly effect even about One Piece itself as a franchise of course leaving out details like names and anything having to do with Brook. - Gabe_3yrตอบกลับถึง
hahaha, dont like it? Go write your own fanfic homie! it's free. Thanks for commenting tho!
Arthur came clean. He told Brook every last detail, Multiverse Theory, his past life, the butterfly effect even about One Piece itself as a franchise of course leaving out details like names and anything having to do with Brook. - Gabe_3yrตอบกลับถึง amaturewriterCh 3 03 The First Raid... Ends?