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Ahh.. I see. Well, thanks for giving me your account name. I'll be sure to check it out👍.

Is the story same of this or is it a completely new one? Also, could you please give me the name of your Wattpad account? So I could search it and look into it.

Ahh... I see. Thanks for telling me, I apriciate it🙏. Also If I may ask, is your story of this in Wattpad have more chapter than the WebNovel? If so, could you please give me a link to it so I could read it, cause I really like it.

Hey, Idk if you're gonna read this, but I want to ask, Is there a chance of this book continuing? Because there's no Shinza Bansho fanfic with a OC Male I can find except you. Well, I hope you reply this and maybe you can continue this. If you do, I'm going to read it 100%. Thank you and I hope you're doing good👍.

Hey, Asthoglo, I have a question(even though I probably know the answer, but I still like to ask), is this story dropped? Or discontinued. I hope it isn't, because there isn't a lot of Kara no Kyoukai and Tsukihime fanfic. I Also, would like to see Arcueid and Ryogi Shiki relationship with Lawrence more. Well, that's all from me. I hope you doing good out there and thank you for making this story.

Thanks for fixing it🙏.

Well, just like before, Author, I hope you read this and fix the gender pronouns, because is the same mistake as before😅, where you wrote Kaoru as she/her where as now you wrote Shiranui as he/him🤣. Well, good luck with fixing it. I haven't check new chapter yet (which is chapter 57 - 58), but I hope it doesn't have the same mistake😂. That's all from me, sorry for the long comment and have nice day/night👋.

"Kaoru often went out without informing *her*,"

"*she paced back and forth in front of the door, unsure of what to do. *She* had tried repeatedly to call Kaoru, but none of his calls connected."

This is a great chapter, there's still need some improvement, but overall is good👍.