SovereignOfDarc
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600 m / h is slow , might have meant km per h ?
can you explain a bit please ? im also confused after this paragraph.
same....
Been a goid 20 chapters , interesting story so far cant wait to read the rest to come. Only the chapters feel very short , didnt take even 20 mins to read 20 chaps , feels more like 3 of the chapters could be placed in 1 , but still keep up the good work , was fun
How i see it , the author placed genisis there like many other works (novels / books / movies ) as a concept of creation , not necessarily the start of creation in this novel , I didnt even connect the two here , i read the genisis part and then started the story , like the intro and then the actual story , I can be wrong , author will know
same here , feels like only they can have it since they know what it is , like from novels they read , believe its different for natives of other worlds to get a system cause they just might think its an entity that tries to take over their body maybe
I see 😊 thanks for clarifying , oh yea , i like the start of your other novels , keep it up!
"I don't even know who made you" - makes sense , but what does "I can't even find out about mine" mean?
another novel i will skip... hope the next one doesnt have these mistakes.
above it was "he" now "she" ???
I have this book in a library alone , for each week on tuesday when the free reading arives i read this book :)
2 hour inside himself was was one year outside , when he first woke up a year had already passed , and then to train he stayed another 10 hours = 5 years , so in total i believe it shpuld actually be 6 years
hmmmm then you should write it as 100,000 not 1,00,000
wow Tion became Randy early in the novel hey