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Gavyn_Mack

Gavyn_Mack

Lv4

just average, but I can say I love reading, I mean just look at all those hours.........😁

2020-04-24 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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2.1kh

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1915

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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack13h
    ตอบกลับถึง Gavyn_Mack

    ignore the typo

    Ch 9 A Large Room filled with Grunts
    altalt
    Reincarnated as a Grunt No. 703
    แอคชั่น · DemonKingAkuma
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack13h
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    I will stay tuned for more chaypters

    Ch 9 A Large Room filled with Grunts
    altalt
    Reincarnated as a Grunt No. 703
    แอคชั่น · DemonKingAkuma
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack14h
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    you went into an alternate universe that should have never been seen

    And yes, the comments are nothing but degenerates being degenerates.
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    Rain of Sins
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Z75
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack18h
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    ......where is the next chapter.... WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER!! ME YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT HERE, I NEED MORE. anyways thanks for the chapter author 👍

    Ch 56 Phantoms Dance: Ch 7
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    Rain of Sins
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Z75
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack1d
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    I'm enjoying the story so far. I can't wait for more

    Ch 8 Grunt Style: Sleeping Fist
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    Reincarnated as a Grunt No. 703
    แอคชั่น · DemonKingAkuma
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    Gavyn_Mack1d
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    .......this is where it begins. Poor guy

    Ch 2 The Inquiries of the "Fortune Teller"
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    Reincarnated as a Grunt No. 703
    แอคชั่น · DemonKingAkuma
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    I'm curious to see more interactions between him and the captain

    Ch 20 Power of a Witch!
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    Reborn As a Pirate
    แฟนตาซี · Rqmk
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    Gavyn_Mack1d
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    oh 😶

    Ch 19 Torture time
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    Truck-Kun At Your Service!
    แฟนตาซี · BAJJ
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack2d
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    I Wish there were more chapters, because now I'm left wondering.........what's gonna happen now!!!

    Ch 17 Maritime Warfare!
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    Reborn As a Pirate
    แฟนตาซี · Rqmk
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack2d
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    I'm enjoying the story so far, and I Can't help but be interested. I can't wait for the next chapter

    Ch 18 Population Control
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    Truck-Kun At Your Service!
    แฟนตาซี · BAJJ
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack2d
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    interesting

    Ch 18 Chapter 18
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    A Rider Kick in Marvel
    ภาพยนตร์ · Najicablitz626
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack3d
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    can't wait for more chyapters

    Ch 16 Skull Pirate!
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    Reborn As a Pirate
    แฟนตาซี · Rqmk
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack3d
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    I want to see what happens next, what will they do. I've been waiting for an interaction between class A and izuku 👍

    Ch 55 Phantoms Dance: Ch 6
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    Rain of Sins
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Z75
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack4d
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    hopefully no harem

    Ch 7 Greedy
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    I am the Weakest Villain: The Regressor Became My Wife?
    แฟนตาซี · kingyujin
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    Gavyn_Mack4d
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    this better not turn into a harem

    'For now…'
    altalt
    A Rider Kick in Marvel
    ภาพยนตร์ · Najicablitz626
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack4d
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    i can't wait for more

    Ch 7 Greedy
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    I am the Weakest Villain: The Regressor Became My Wife?
    แฟนตาซี · kingyujin
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack7d
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    ah......chaos, what a great chapter, but now i have to wonder..............what's next. I Can't help but be excited, but thanks to you author, the wait for another chapter will be hell........😑

    Ch 53 Phantoms Dance: Ch 4
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    Rain of Sins
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Z75
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack7d
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    makes sense 😐

    (Note, as I am new to webnovel, and am just crossposting everything of mine via copy paste, I have no idea how to put pictures here, like you can on A03. So you'll have to use your mine- or join the discord)
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    Rain of Sins
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Z75
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack8d
    ตอบกลับถึง Najicablitz626

    sure, I've noticed that you don't use enough pronouns(He, she), which makes reading feel weird and fake in some way. You want your story to flow and connect, which leads to another problem I noticed. you don't use commas, you use periods. when you use periods for everything, it makes your story feel like it's starting and ending over and over again. so try adding more commas.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
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    A Rider Kick in Marvel
    ภาพยนตร์ · Najicablitz626
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack8d
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    I finally caught up to the latest chapter, all I can say is that the story is good, but the writing quality isn't. now don't get me wrong, I've seen worse out there, but the writing mistakes are noticeable and numerous. but like I said, this is a good story so, can't wait for more 👍

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
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    A Rider Kick in Marvel
    ภาพยนตร์ · Najicablitz626
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