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And here is the author's shameless review, To start off I'll write the story's weaknesses. Honestly, this novel has so many grammatical errors I am thankful that many readers still take time to read it. I am thankful because the readers are kind enough to point out my mistakes. I would often read my novel to check, but somehow whenever I do my brain automatically corrects the errors, making me unable to see them since I read them correctly. The pacing is a bit slow and sometimes you can read the transition being wrong. I am working on it but thank you for still reading. The Main character is still a kid so please have patience with his decisions if they seem a bit inappropriate. He will improve but please don't stop commending for suggestions since I am considering listening to my reader's suggestion. That's all for now please do add more if I miss anything, thank you As for the strength please start reading and write them here.
Been reading your comments thanks for the correction and thank you for reading!
Unfortunately no, not yet, since the seal has a twist so Apollo plans to keep.
Read the next sentences and you will see that Apollo uses conversion to turn the percentage into times. So mirror tenfold can now return ten times the damage received instead of percent
I will keep that in mind If it's okay can I ask which part was very hard to read or understand so that I could change it. That's all thank you
I am sorry I am not Spanish but a Filipino. In Tagalog mano-mano is a short term for fights with no weapons. Everything will be done using your hand
What Apollo is doing is testing the effects of the potions, doing this act left his body vulnerable with any effects the potion may bring. That is why Jeremiah is there in case something negative transpires from taking the potion. After all it was an incomplete one and he was testing multiple combinations of it from different herbs
He does but in his current situation helios is his best option against a member of the imperial family
Guns already exist here, it wasn't him who came up with it. It was already used and discovered before he was even born. Gun powders in this world are part of alchemy while the gun's body is part of forging or a work of blacksmith. Also on chapter 3- 4 it was briefly mentioned that Blue Moon towers does research about weapons. That's all I hope this helps you