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GTFO of here with that shit. Find somewhere else to peddle this, and let people focus on shitty translations of stories.

I really enjoyed this book! I added this story when it first started coming out but when I saw that it was competed, I binged it. I love this trope of a Cultivator transmigrating to Earth, and I thought that the plot was well-done! My only complaint is that I feel that the ending was slightly rushed. Overall, good read though!

The prose, the plot, the characters; It’s all mixed together beautifully. I genuinely enjoyed this story and I hope that more people will take the chance to read it too. To me, it was clear that the author put love into this story. In the time I’ve spent on this app, I can honestly say that the amount of put-together stories I’ve come across can be counted on one hand. And this story is now added to that list. It grabbed my attention since it was a ‘transmigration’ story, but the more I read, and the revelations of: in a novel, magic finger, regressions… I loved every one of them and thought that they just further enhanced the plot. There were minimal grammar errors, if any, and my only complaint is that some passages about the original M&FL could could have been expanded to show more of that plot line going on in this background. Great job, Author!

Well…. I’m sure there’s money conversion issues they forgot… hopefully.

Thank you for an actual review, and not just posting f*cking emojis. This helps a lot! Bless 🙏🏻

Bravo! 👏🏻 👏🏻👏🏻

I’m not stating this in a mean way, just as an informative tip from one woman to another. ‘Popping their cherry’ is just an expression. For the first time, there is nothing in there to ‘pop.’ The pain experienced is just from the adjusting, so to speak. You have something, that by default is only a few millimeters in width, suddenly stretching to accommodate something that may be over inches in width. And blood only happens if that stretching is way too fast and tears the thin skin surrounding it. Again, don’t want to sound like an “um, actually…” person, just wanted to share for anyone who may be under that impression.

I second and third this sentiment!!! There was no explanation given and it ends in the middle of a scene. Is this based off a book? Did the book stop? Did the people producing it give up? Radio silence. BS.

Unfortunately I do not 😢 I haven’t seen anything.

As of 5-14-24, this is turning out to be interesting! I love the play on ‘Jealous Govener Ling’ but this one definitely seems leveled-up on the aspects of forensics. If you like the type of shows like ‘House’ and ‘Bones’ then this just might be up your alley.