Mc_Fly
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Mc_Fly1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว'No... not again...'- Mc_Fly6mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วWhen they saw me bow my body, everyone fell silent, but I knew that wasn't enough, so I continued, "If you are still upset, you can report it to the Underground Student Council, and I will come along to be your witness."
- Mc_Fly6mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วLooking at these men sitting at the same table as me made me sigh in frustration because they were a bunch of losers from every angle I saw, and what disgusted me the most was their pervertedness that knew no bounds.
- Mc_Fly6mthตอบกลับถึง AcOu0KinGShe was a beautiful middle-aged woman that seemed to be in her late twenties. Her breasts were way too big. Not to mention she had a loose button, it was as if they would burst out.
- Mc_Fly8mthตอบกลับถึง Betoran2
some people have weird kinks
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Mc_Fly9mthแปะแล้ว
It just keeps getting worse and worse with each chapter. The main character lacks any "character". And its presence only subtracts from the logic of the plot. We get numerous opinions about the ML, but his actions aren't reassuring. A lacking protagonist, with a significantly bland story combined with a writing style that doesn't fit. Nevertheless, I invite anyone who reads my comment to try it. After all, it may be a simple matter of taste.
- Mc_Fly10mthตอบกลับถึง Kurdi123
Then stop reading, if you dislike it so much just stop reading.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Mc_Fly10mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Just a Nightstalker."
- Mc_Fly10mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"We heard you loud~ and~ clear~, mum~." They chimed in unison, "We'll respect him just like we respect Percy!"
- Mc_Fly11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh -1 The Great Rewrite
- Mc_Fly11mthตอบกลับถึง Shota_Prince'Must be nice to be that strong.' Void sighed internally observing his carefree demeanor.
- Mc_Fly11mthตอบกลับถึง Noble_K1ng
do you know the chords of every song you hear?
Then I found the finger style pattern that matched, in that second everything came together to create such a haunting melody that sent chills down my spine. It captured the lyrics of the song like it was made for it. I got lost in the melody while perfecting it, the transition between the pre chorus to the chorus was where the goose bumps needed to hit, and my god did it. - Mc_Fly11mthตอบกลับถึง UthredofBebbanburg
still not gonna write themselves
"I woke up an hour ago old man, these songs ain't gonna write themselves" He turned to me with a cheeky smile, it's good to see him smile again. - Mc_Fly11mthตอบกลับถึง aurelienShe is very cute. I wonder how cute she would be with cat ears and a tail.
- Mc_Fly11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think Complete - Jordan would be a good song with the background
I don't need to change myself, just be the best version of me. - Mc_Fly11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Oh for fuck sake..."
- Mc_Fly11mthแปะแล้ว
The story is good, English isn't my first language, so I can't review the grammar. Therefore, I will talk about the plot. Spoilers ahead. It's been 15 chapters, yet the main lead is still a baby and had less than 1 hour of "screen time" As a personal preference, I would have enjoyed it more if we were shown each personality and its perks from the pov of the parents as the prologue. Instead, we got a subject that could cause a crisis for the personalities even before we could create an emotional connection with them. I believe it would have been better to fit small insights into it through the years and let the readers slowly realize what is happening. Nevertheless, it is a good story, and people should try it. I find myself excited to see how it develops.
- Mc_Fly1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วAi's eye twitched, and she kept a conscious effort to make sure her eyes didn't stray downwards. She knew Jason was a fit person, but she didn't expect him to have the physique of a Greek statue.
- Mc_Fly1yrแปะแล้ว
- Mc_Fly1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Wheatley, don't make him hold back. Make him go for the kill and remove his gadgets."