something like that

So far so good :D This a refreshing story. The characters are capturing and fun to read as you follow this story. Keep it up!!

16 is already here :D

Stary ;-; ja to pisałem po angielsku nie po polsku ;-;

Nice Novel. Good start. What is most attractive to me you can't guess what will happen next. Keep on writing Author Good job!!!!!!!

So far good novel with good story. I like the main character and his growth along the way. So far, there are still few chapters. I'll be back here when there be more of them. Keep it up :D

Hello there, dropping my review here :D I must say that you have interesting story with nice plot. Characters development seems good. Keep it up!

Interesting story with something new in the genre. First-person view is rather rare, but it is easy to get used to. There are few chapters so far, and they are slow paced. I am waiting for more ;)

New edited version :D

I have not deliberately deleted your comments. But by fixing the mistakes in these paraphrases, they seem to have disappeared. ;-; Sorry

My mistake, I already fixed it. In the first chapter I also noticed some and reposted them. Thx for your com ments ;)

Once after the party I had an unpleasant meeting. During which my hand was injured. Due to adrenaline, I did not realize that I had a hole in my hand. It was only after fight, when my girlfriend told me that I was covered in blood, I realized. So yes it’s possible. ;)

Good story, but definitely needs more chapters. You can see in this novel a lot of potential. Sometimes only grammar is lame but I can get over it.

Very good novel, please don't drop it. In my opinion, this is a hidden gem. I read everything in two days and I would like to know the Kai's further adventures.