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I am Ready and welcome to the Mov Literary Universe

2020-03-31 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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    ตอบกลับถึง Dark_Renega

    Yes, he remains a skeleton throughout the story, his physical appearance will barely change, only evolving in terms of strength, abilities and such

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    ตอบกลับถึง Fallency

    My thanks for the gift!

    Ch 1 Witnessing A Miracle
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    ตอบกลับถึง Lazy_cat0

    My thanks for the gift!

    Ch 15 Beginning
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    ตอบกลับถึง Lazy_cat0

    My thanks for the gift!

    Ch 15 Beginning
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    ตอบกลับถึง Lazy_cat0

    My thanks for the gift!

    Ch 15 Beginning
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    ตอบกลับถึง crazyfunbun

    My thanks for the gift!

    Ch 60 Aspects Of Energy
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    ตอบกลับถึง crazyfunbun

    My thanks for the gift!

    Ch 10 Fear
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    ตอบกลับถึง Sachin_AAA

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    Ch 32 Prowl
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    ตอบกลับถึง UnKnownEntity001

    Not in the typical sense

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    แปะแล้ว

    Welcome, It's me, the author. I am Ready and here is the obligatory five-star review from me to myself, I can't judge my own book objectively, so I'll simply provide some basic information. -There is no actual romance of any kind involving the protagonist, if you think you see some, it is naught but humour. -The main character is a skeleton that goes by the name of Loimos, as far as sapient corpses go, he is meant to be an undead through and through, everything is for the sake of the dead. -The release rate is two chapters per day, and I intend on keeping it as such until I, or this book, meet our end. If you have any questions, go ahead and asks them below.

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    ตอบกลับถึง aMz

    My thanks for the gifts

    Ch 1 Witnessing A Miracle
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    ตอบกลับถึง JBFIRE_77

    Don’t worry, no romance, just jocking around with the idea, a corpse can’t have romantic feelings

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    ตอบกลับถึง OverlyCookedBacon

    My thanks for the kind words

    Ch 18 Desperation
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    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
    Creating New Memories Together
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    The concept and ideas seem pretty nice so far (11 chapters), the story seems to set up to be one of vengeance with a hint of dark powers, though, the first few chapters are held back by the constant switches between first and third person, an issue which is resolved later on but the problem still remain at the very start of the novel, I would suggest a overhaul of the chapters with this issue. The writing isn't bad by any means, but it isn't fluid, in the sense that there are some mistakes that are pretty much impossible to miss, which brings the reading to a stop and hinders the flow severely. Another minor issue, which might not be one for everyone, I personally find the chapters a bit too lengthy, not certain if its just me imagining things. If I am not delusional, then cutting the number of words to around 1000, no less, would be beneficial. All in all, this is the author's first book by the looks of it, the few problems I noted are only natural and will most certainly be erased as they get more experience. Look forward to the future. Also, since I know the author worships Esdeath:

    หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว
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    ตอบกลับถึง Tog_Python

    Well, it is a fairly basic fantasy world and as for the system, it is the somewhat extensive but standard system I use for most of my stories with one, nothing too special about it, XP, skills and such, although it isn't very prevalent in Draconic Madness, as with most of my short stories

    Ch 6 You And I, We Have No Faces
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    ตอบกลับถึง Tog_Python

    I don’t have any good image for the dragon unfortunately, what do you want to know about the world exactly?

    Ch 6 You And I, We Have No Faces
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    ตอบกลับถึง Jay_Woods_2344

    I left it up to interpretation, so my opinion is as good as anyone else’s, I personally consider him to be human

    Ch 8 Gone Forever?
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    ตอบกลับถึง Evolwolf

    The Hunchback Of Notre Dame (1996) By Disney

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    ตอบกลับถึง Absolute_Qlipoth

    Thanks for the nice comment, don’t worry I don’t plan to go on any hiatus before this book is over

    Ch 126 Emotional Support Elf (ESF)
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