TheChosenCum

sorry, ch 250 not 270

this one is very entertaining. how the characters develop feels quite natural and not forced, although their love is a bit extreme. everytime I finish a chapter I want to read the next one. the development of their personal lives isnt overshadowed. although the system is largely overlooked after ch20 which is a shame, and the speed of time isnt really explained well, as well as other side characters are mostly left in the dust. all of which I dont care about because it leaves me more chapters of the mc and his girl, which is good in my opinion. overall a really enjoyable read.

I gotta say, this has been one of the better storys on webnovel. I'm not sure how much thought the author put in this story but story development has been good, atleast it's better than those face slapping storys that leave you brain dead. this one has a good trajectory. I've read the mtl passed chapter 270 and it has still been very entertaining. the main character is fairly kind but self centered which is good in my opinion. overall an enjoyable read.

I thought this would be interesting, but this is another mindless face slapping novel. They sacrifice the story for these moments and the whole novel hurts becomes of it. many other novels do this and it really bothers me. dont do it if it will make your novel worse. Also chapters 1-10 the translation is pretty good, 11-20 it gets a bit wonky, then from 21-30 you can see the problems. I stopped st 31 because the story became mindless, the whole system was forgotten for some dumb drama, and the translation become worse throughout the story. hope this becomes better in the future.

heroic spirit huh, like... huh?, what

I think it would fall off, I dont think patek make children sized watches

he was prepared for the end of the world. I should learn from him

yes yes, I can say one thing and still do the other. what!! no I'm not being hypocritical

I really like this story, not only is it entertaining but it also goes beyond that and has value outside of entertainment. a great movie sticks with you after you've seen it, this does the same as a novel.

overall the novel is entertaining, the mc is actually very interesting and it's fun to hear his thoughts. he also seems to be quite realistic and human. although the story does develop a little slowly during the first 20 chapters it does get more interesting. another complaint I have is that we hear nothing about the world outside the forest until chapter 35+, but when it did happen it was pretty interesting, like maybe a little. overall decent.