BL00DY

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I hope he uses his lv10 cores before advancing further.

It's a good thing that he added that part because it wasn't there before. Too bad he couldn't simply acknowledge that he was wrong 😔.

xd Another one with an already dead brain.

Poorly made characters, we practically know nothing about them and their beginning makes no sense but i guess the author wants to make something "mysterious". The story didn't even begin properly and yet there are more mistakes than chapters. I was wondering if common quality was rare then what was normally supposed to drop, a trash quality gear? Next chapter everything magically is uncommon. The previous chapter was not corrected, probably too lazy for that. Anyway, MC gets SSS talent Primordial Summoner. At the beginning it has 3 effects and #4 mentions that more can be unlocked. He can summon a primordial beast every 2 months, extract something from his summons and summon the beasts he killed and more would be unlocked. Yet 2 chapters later we get to know that beside 3 effects and more to unlock he has another one namely summon random beast... The author poorly explains(of course not in the story because it's too obvious) that by having summoner talent he can by standard setting summon a random beast, so even if you have a talent 'make a fire shield' you can also make a fireball and other fire spells, which doesn't make any sense.

Anyway what's the point of even trying to explain that, when you even make mistakes in things as simple as item quality.

... So what's the use of the talenn effects if they don't matter and he can do whatever he wants? I guess he can also tame a beast probably enslave too, why not it's not mentioned anywhere but why not. What a bs.

Nice that you don't even know what you are writing about.

Are you serious??? It's the 5th chapter and the story already has multiple mistakes. Wdym 'he can summon normal beasts'? When #3 clearly states that he can only summon beasts he killed... He clearly didn't kill a Hawk. What a letdown.

Your review was deleted, after all, he deletes everything that put his novel in a bad light.