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[Image Here] - ArTaz20dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I didn't understand if it was him or her.
Her thigh muscle was torn, rendering her incapable of moving properly. - ArTaz20dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I do not understand where they came from?
Although Yuuna and Quintia often mixed armor parts with their school uniforms, Serena was the first to possess a full-fledged masterpiece, complete with a helmet. - ArTaz26dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I don't get it. If it's five times its weight, how can it hold up half a ship? It's a regular patrol ship.
Pressure surged in the middle of the group, causing everyone to fall to the ground, except Yamato, who barely felt the pressure and looked at everyone with amusement. - ArTaz27dแปะแล้ว
To be honest, it's kind of ambivalent, on the one hand it's not bad, on the other hand it's not clear. I mean the interaction of Luke with the rest, there are whole chapters in which Luke just sighs and that's it. the feeling that he is mute, and can not talk, I would like to interact with other characters. Another point is that a lot of “water”, that is, a lot of unnecessary words, what the author wrote in previous chapters, he repeats the same in subsequent chapters, I do not mind the explanation, but he has it too detailed and unnecessary, the plot is interesting, romance is not yet clear, so I'm waiting for better writing, unless of course the author does not abandon it.
- ArTaz1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I have a question, since Lucas is also an animagus, can’t he understand what a cat or dog is saying?
At this moment, Crookshanks in his arms struggled and jumped to the ground and chased after Sirius in the direction where he disappeared. - ArTaz1mthตอบกลับถึง Alex081904
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Eiji smirked, if Chisato turned around and saw his face now. She would definitely be confused because Eiji's eyes had now changed. His pupils became black, his irises became golden yellow. His face and hair were still the same, but his skin also now looked a little paler.