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и я не против как он поступает с соломенными шляпами, или с какими то персонажами, да хоть убивает их, просто должно быть обоснованно, это фанфик, отдельная вселенная и история, но она должна быть хорошо придуманна, и должна быть черта перед которой ты не должен переходить, а не делать оправданием что он солдат, я тоже был солдатом, но то что ты пишешь это уже перебор

First of all, I'm upset that this fanfic is not understandable, everything happens too fast, I agree that Arlong, and more than deserves to be punished, I don't even mind the “fast” relationship with Nami and Nojiko, but when he recruits Tashigi, I thought it was pure bullshit, you certainly tried to explain, but killing all the marines and Smoker, and forcing Tashigi to do it, I thought it was just bullshit, and I'm sure the rest of the “Harem” members were joined as well. The main character is a manipulative (doubt), formidable (too), calculating and strong (strong word) character who kills left and right, I like ruthless heroes but not psychos who will kill left and right, and why did he steal the swords? when he could have easily bought them without harming the sellers. I also hate it when the protagonist doesn't like his systems for no reason, without him you would have nothing, and what kind of test did he set up on Barrati for his “new” team member?

I read this story a long time ago and it didn't seem to end, I hope the translator will finish this story, there are few decent and well thought out harem one piece fanfics

To be honest I'm disappointed, the book started out very good, but then it rolled away, and I'm not saying that he is ruthless, it's normal, but the way he behaves arrogantly it's annoying, and okay he would still be strong, but he's no, dependent on the system, but also behaves the same way with her coldly, I don't understand.... adding new characters when there are old ones,

I honestly don't understand why the author is making such a mockery of luffy, because he's not essentially in the way of getting girls? oh come on.... but I don't mind.