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silentpassenger90

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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902mth
    แปะแล้ว

    Are you the same author that posted this on fanfiction.net? It had been over 4 years since u updated. Is this a rewrite, or are you just crossposting?

    หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว
  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger906mth
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    other than the fact that he will have a hard time explaining where he got the lightsaber and clothes, I thought it was good. my question now is, if at the end of the template will he be able to retain the lightsaber fighting styles since he practiced them himself, or will they be wiped out if he chooses to retain force usage?

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 Sentinels
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    Marvel with a Template
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · EdwardJPrath
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger907mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Pizzamanxtra

    yikes.

    Janerys agreed, knowing that the Targaryen line was fraught with complexities, including a history of intermarriage. He and his mother shared an intimate night, resulting in a promise of a child who would carry their lineage into the future.
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    Westeros Reimagined: The Scientist's Resurgence
    ซีรีส์โทรทัศน์ · Aniket_Sharma_7677
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger901yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    I read this on whim, and boy, am I glad I did. I am hooked. great job! I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Ch 16 Ashes of the Mind - Finale
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    The Counselor - A Group Chat Story
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Zevren
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger901yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    I think maybe making an outline of what your next 4 or 6 chapters may help with the block. knowing where u want ur character to go makes figuring out how you want him to get there a bit easier.

    Ch 20 Tough titties
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    A spacewolf in westeros
    ซีรีส์โทรทัศน์ · Love_dem_fanfix
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger901yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    write the story u want. otherwise u will be agonizing over peoples opinions and make u lose motivation. great chapter!

    Ch 20 Chapter 18.
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    Into The Kaleidoscope
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · GoldFinger
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger901yr
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    is he still 8 years old or did I miss something?

    I slumped over her sweaty body, dispelling the chains and restraints with a wave of my hand. Gil let out a tired, choked gasp as she turned over. Now, call me paranoid, but I had a feeling she was trying to make an angry expression and… Failing miserably. Suddenly, I felt myself be lifted up and thrown on the broken bed. Seconds later, Gil crawled and hovered over me, face colder than a block of ice. "I see I've neglected to teach you how to respect your superior…" She climbed on me, straddling my waist. "Don't worry, I'll be sure to teach you properly today."
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    Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Undergoing Rewrite]
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Huntsman
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger901yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    please continue. it's a great story!

    Ch 14 First Year Start
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    HP Marvel Aquaman
    ภาพยนตร์ · VatOfRedundancy
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
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    To survive and be strong in this world and to meet his family. This also resulted in his choice of becoming a ninja. He could use the business tactics he learned to open a business and use the money to learn ninjutsu later on but it takes a long time to start a successful business and he may not be able to become strong and die in the hands of people like Payne.
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    Naruto: Reborn with the eyes of death perception
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · KyuuSushi
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
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    kill her

    A/N: What do you want me to do about Rias? I mean many are unsatisfied by not involving Rias romantically with Kiba, so what do you guys want me to about it? Give me one clear answer!
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    Kiba
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Krishnbarad
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    it's your story, do what you want but there are good reasons as to why super heroes have secret identities. first is the most obvious, to protect their loved ones from their enemies. Second and probably far more important, to protect themselves from property damage law suits.

    Well, that would reveal my identity too soon. I don't really like the secret identity thing Spider-man and heroes from DC have going on, so I don't plan to keep my mask on for long, but I would rather wait until I get some power before revealing myself.
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    Incomplete System in Marvel
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Chaostic
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Goven_Mazarini

    The grammar also makes it very difficult to understand.

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    Naruto: Legendary Quest
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · DaoistC3PZue
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
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    can still buy knives and ammo in Wal-Mart

    And since we are in America you can get a weapon even from Walmart ( Just kidding, I don't want to insult anyone, sorry if you hurt from this joke).
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    Survival of a Loner MARVEL
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · daoistofeverything
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    great start! can't wait for the next chapters!

    Ch 3 Testing Limits, Talking And A Spar
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    MCU: The Darkness
    ภาพยนตร์ · rockhavel6
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
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    vacuum style from basilisk. or the wire style from basilisk.

    With the other chakra natures I wanted to use scientific principles from my last life to get instantly strong: like with lightning I could fire coins like a railgun, or with water, I could maximize the pressure for water guns or bombs...but for wind, I really don't have anything I can think of...
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    Mob Without System In Naruto World
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Yukki_Sensei
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    welcome back!

    Ch 77 Blackfyre
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    Game Of Thrones: House Dustin
    ซีรีส์โทรทัศน์ · EnderPL
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    I've read this like ten times. I hope you come back to this and bless us with another chapter.

    Ch 2 The Fight Between Beasts and The Break Out
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    MCU: X5-Series Super Soldier
    ภาพยนตร์ · Bruh_Moment_2806
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Brezer

    I thought the same thing. I made William albino because, I thought it was funny that so many characters were living with albinism. I mean, what are the odds right? lol!

    He decided to continue his snooping until he came to a wall with metal polished to a mirror finish and finally took a look at his new self. He looked to be about ten- twelve years old. He looked to be tall for a preteen. His face was in the awkward stage between a cute childish face and that of a young man. His hair was a mop top of pure white. His eye color was a milky pale blue. Overall he looked like a tanned boy suffering from Oculocutaneous albinism. Which simply meant his eyes and hair were devoid of pigment.
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    Reincarnation is Overrated
    ภาพยนตร์ · silentpassenger90
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Mick_E

    yeah. I'm gonna continue this story but my others will be rewritten

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    Reincarnation is Overrated
    ภาพยนตร์ · silentpassenger90
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  • silentpassenger90
    silentpassenger902yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Anonny_Anonymous

    Anakin hasn't lost all his limbs yet.

    The most recent batch of clone bodies had been created with that in mind he had also discovered that the previous clone body had only had a midichlorian count of 18000 and was deemed a failure but that they were close to creating a body that would meet Palpitine's criteria for success upon the next iteration which was his current body. William had with the help of JW gotten his blood tested for midichlorians and he discovered he had 20000. He was almost as strong as Anakin Skywalker. According to the notes Palpitine had set the criteria as 19000. He was the first success. 
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    Reincarnation is Overrated
    ภาพยนตร์ · silentpassenger90
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