There are two equal paths to stories, in my opinion. In column one, it is stories that are fun and enjoyable but make your brain hurt if you think too hard. In column two, it is stories that make so much sense, they force you to enjoy them out of the sheer thought that went into their construction. This story... is in column one! If you're looking for a fun junk food story, then look no further!!!

It is too early to tell whether or not this will be good, but it seems promising enough... I've read some of your other stories, I just wish you wouldn't give up so often... So don't give up!

I... have no idea what I'm reading! That's probably because I'm not even halfway through Reverend Insanity, but I couldn't resist. In any case, this is enjoyable enough even with my confusion.

I usually read and do not comment, but the effort that has gone into this fic has compelled me to log in. There isn't a single part of this story that is lacking!

I think what really irks me is that you write like 8 paragraphs in between dialogue about information that is obvious to anyone paying attention. So it makes for scenes where the characters are legit standing there for an entire chapter. I really wanna like this fic but you’re losing me here.

This excessively bloated prose is just your writing style, isn't it? Well, whatever. If you don't wanna change your style, I feel like it'd be better if you combined chapters before posting. The chapters have felt incomplete for a while now. Or don't. I'm just some dude.

There's no way this story is so ████████, like, how did you do it? Did you ████ or maybe you ██████??? I have to know bro this is ██████ It's hurting my brain like how

If I'm really being honest, this is the ever. Like, there's no story that's more than this one. And if you don't believe me you're a , like seriously. You gotta read this story it's so .

História muito boa, ótimo protagonista, com uma história bem desenvolvida e com uma história que não é clichê, muito bom,...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Re-read the paragraph. She is currently evolving into her third evo. I believe it was mentioned earlier that all pokemon have 3 evos in this au

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