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though there is presently only one chapter, I find myself already wishing for more, the charactres who have been introduced are all intrigueing, compared to other books I have read this one stands out for the fluidity of the writing, I find that there are no moments that leave me confused (a trait to easily found in murim) I like the undertone of religion, and the clear criticism of corruption within religion as well as the use of consolations. As well as this I like the small bits of world building present, though a simple flower we discover that firstly, well there are flowers that glow, second that there are aristocrats, third, that these charicters are living ascetic lifes, and the characters themselves are a point of interest, i feel their relationship is portrayed well, however, since this is only a first chapter, its dificult to speak more comprehensively, i can only specuate that this will be, if seen though, a wonderful story.

then he just has no agency

yesh :3

sorry i had expected an all powerfull being. if i coukd delete this i would. :p

it was from one punch man. yours is goated. water = good. lol

your pfp is like mine :3

i guess there not even a ron.....

:0 relivant ROB???? they usualy disappear ch1 never to be seen again lol

so.... room to grow

can someone explain?