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I miss those days when you release extra chapters
what I mean to say is that you should lock the chapter only when you reach 50+. in other words throw us some bone first, if you want us to continue reading.
"big brother" and land of rice paddies lmao. Chinese translation?
people read at the very least 40 to 50 chapters before deciding whether it is worth to further invest in the story or not. if you want readers to draw out the type of character with only 5 or 6 chapters, it is detrimental to the writer. for example, power of mc is very vague, story is rushed, mc seem naive, story doesn't properly link together. but that could change and rectified in the following chapters which is prematurely locked. unless you want to leave a bad impression for the readers and not want them to continue with the story
these people are so out of character. orochi caring for other. constant surveillance on mc. kushina excellent chakra control. this has to be a joke
plz enough with the gritted teeth
you are too much invested on the relationship side of the story that you have completely abandon the cautious nature of mc and the progression of the story. im out. good luck with your story
what kind of idiot helps others create technique that can counter their own power
mc is a disappointment. lying when the truth is obvious. he already used shikai in front of others so what is the point of lying. and telling the truth when it should be kept a secret. mc is way too honest for his own good. I'll give this novel a few more chances but if the mc doesn't smart up ill be dropping this novel for good. I can't bear to read dumb mc novel
can u tell me the timeskip chapter?