dfkin_white

kill them

if you keep posting , with time, it will gain attraction . you shouldn't give up on it like that

i hope you don't drop this fic , its one of a kind .

nice , she got her redemption

it's becoming increasingly harder to read this . I was actually hoping the author could fix his writing . long chapters with long explanations that are useless for the plot

the only thing that bothers me is the length of the description and explanation of scenes . If you could try to tone it down, it would be a huge plus

😕 😒 the story is okay I guess, but, the lack of writing quality really puts me off.

dude wtf is wrong with you this is an abomination

sounds logical

😂nice chapter