Bigfish

Yeah, I just couldn't stand the sight of my previous chapters being up. This was the first novel I ever wrote and my work definitely reflected that. I wasn't sure if anyone would actually see my review, but looks like I was wrong!

Temporary review for the time being. New chapters coming within the next few months! I have revised my previous work, and improved on it in many ways. Expect longer, more well-put together chapters. I'm planning on publishing again sometime in December, but no guarantees as of yet. I have two other novels already completed that I am revising and might upload afterwards depending on the reception of this one.

Good stuff!

Wonderful. His revenge story and ultimate failure will compliment the Tyrant of Steel's legend.

Is he stupid? His little brother has tried to kill him three times. He even has evidence of one of his idiotic schemes. Present the evidence and then deliver a musket round through his chest. What is his father going to do when such obvious charges of treason are presented and Lambert is already dead? He can't appoint the sister as the next heir.

Very likely. In Berengar's case, I don't think he cares. He's already been ostracized by the nearby nobility due to Lambert's schemes.

Hm. It seems Webnovel scrunched my review together which makes it appear as a giant wall of text :/. TLDR; Leonel is portrayed as being highly intelligent but he follows Aina around like a dog in heat despite the fact she has done NOTHING for him. Not to mention he's an eighteen year old who suddenly obtains superpowers and yet he still has absolutely no ambition or drive to improve. Everything he's done as of chapter 73 just feels forced by the author. Leonel has shown no real desire to do anything other than follow Aina around.

I don't think the author has actually thought that far ahead.