Well this was the mandatory smut we get it, Suki whole not the greatest does leave an impression.

Her being the first girl we meet in this story and all would be extra hot.

I suppose mainly because they like Charlie as a character specially compared to Reene and want to do some justice to the poor treatment he received from Bella during the series.

Such a great reading! Wish you all the best dear writer keep up the quality please.

Of course you were owed an educated and civilised response at the very least. Honestly? I would try creating an original setting similar to HOTD but with its own peculiarities,it is a vastly exploited scenario and putting/honing your talents as a writers with your own content is always far better than keep toying with overwatched animes. Nevertheless no matter what you decide,proops to you for actually reading the reviews and learning from them like a good writer should.

A-Orphanage I want more of Shinji's background and learn more about the circunstances he had while growing up,perphaps some family hints?Show us the roos of the hero! Also the quest/story is really cool though Iam surprised to find something like this on Webnovel as this is more SV/SB/QQ' s domain.

The question was oriented more to how does the new characters heigh compare to Komachi's?The MC is more developed than the original Hachi that also reflects on how tall he is yes?

How tall is Komachi then compared to new Hikki?

Loved the Ayame chapters! Give us more of her every now and then specially when Boruto gathers all the harem members.

Heh cannot help but love greedy protagonists. "And then his pupils turned into golden coins"

Is Saki,Hideo's childhood friend? Would love to see more of her on the series,pleasantly surprised by the story's quality. A little afraid of Hideo leaving behind this modern setting that is working up perfectly for the plot.

Don't let wear you down mate! No matter what happens one should always priorise their happiness,stay strong,fight back and you shall see how better days are just around the corner. All my support,draw all the strength you need and slap life itself back!

Nice to know only implied it you know cause the guy literally has a "Moderator" tag near his username. Was it that difficult to put "Translator" on its place? It is easy if you are not familiar with this role assignment that Webnovel uses to be genuinely confused.

Rana I believe she was called but yes hopefully there is sweet pregnant action on this story!

With more flexed chapters and better grammar I would agree but the presentation is the Webnovel average and that's usually bad news.

*You committed an affair You've become an adulterer The second one is the correct form,you truly were confused writing that one eh author?

By the gods! Are you truly a Web Novel moderator? They finally did it the madmen,monotoring the content more closely which on this case is to be commended as it was the prime example of intolerance and blatant disregard of other people's cultures and identities. Still I am worried moderators will end up being petty censors that would limit the page's creativity or Hunting dogs that persue old vendettas. The creation of the role does worry me quite a bit,I understand its purpose and I am not that much of an active user yet roles like this one often end up evolving into straight up tyrannical and arbitrary behaviours.

Living on an European country on a middle sized city I have never seen young children involved in work not on shady deals of any shape and manner,14/15 years old teenagers are the norm where such things are somewhat visible which is concerning enough without involving the youngest out there.

Doesn't change that the overall story is unfinished,no offense but getting attached to the plot only to find myself clashing with the hiatus barrier is not my idea of fun/entertaining reading.

Believe there is worse stuff waiting for you on Web Novel. Leave while you still can.