Britney_Mauliola

It made the trail read list and had no chapter at first. Now it looks like it could be a good read but to slow of a transition and not captivating enough. It a no for me. The first 20 chapters need to hook me in and this doesn’t.

I truly enjoy this story so far and hope to be able to read more in the future. Although the story has similarities with other farming transmigration stories. This on is nicely written with the transition of point of view story telling adaptable.

This is one of my first comments but I just couldn’t enjoy this story. It’s trash. Just my opinion. I hope the story takes a better turn.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

More chapters please!!!

It drags and I do want it to show up as a free trial read. I wont read it ecen if its free much less pay for it. I’m so sorry but it not my cup kf tea and I’m sure there are please who would love this.

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This chapter ended like that last and feel like a great waste. very disappointed.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon