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Hmmm.... It's kind of slow paste, and a little bit edgy here and there. But it's alright, it has one or two spelling mistakes but nothing a little double-checking and editing can't fix. So far not much is known about the word, but it just started so it's understandable. Although I would like an explanation as to why the apocalypse started in the first place, it just felt a little rush if not too sudden. But seeing you have experience in creating Yanders just like your last book I have high expectations for when they show up. But apart from that author Good Luck, and keep up the good work.
I'm getting srs Lloyd vibes from Cain
Ok so I will give an honest review here, the grammar is alright, although there are one or two types, however, the way how the author starts it's off is typical and cliche, like most novels on this platform, what makes this book so special is the fact that hmmm how can I say this well let's just say I'm getting some getting black lagoon, Hellsing ultimate and Elden ring vibes here, but amazingly enough the author right it in such a way that you will fall in love with it instantly, and what I like about it here is probably the main character and also the author naming sense, and unlike other MC this one main weapon is well different for a high fantasy world like this, the main power source is simple it's like one universal energy and something else I won't say cause spoilers but it like jujitsu kaisen curse energy and the understanding of it, but the system is different as well, but overall what I like about this book is that well it hilarious as fuck, gore, cultured chapters, and my god the first yandere candidate seems insane, and i cant wait to see Mc who Morgan female form, and when i say their a lot lf sexual jokes there a lot, but the way its written superb I loveeee it in my opinion, the first chapter although cliche the way its was presented is what hook me, I see potential in this book so yeah its worth the read and lots of Yandere.
I like Mythos and Yanderes what can I say, I do enjoy reading this, the start was unique as well, and I find it interesting that the mc is immortal and have multiple personalities, I also find it hilarious that his son is Hitler, but yeah Yandere Supremacy all the way, you should try it out there just something entertaining about this Mc.
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I guess but I feel the destruction capability when to awaken is on par with Excalibur Morgan.
Hahaha... I can't wait to write Yukinomaru in action, she basically a light saber as her flames will continue to rise and get hotter in battle to point even the flames start to change color.
Yeah pretty much, I feel like Gilgamesh's alien form should feel both horrendous yet beautiful.
thanks will correct it
Yes, his only option after that would be Yanderecalibur or Archetype Yangire mode.
fufuf for all, we know Gilgamesh might have wasted his investment, of course, yandere in this story are very tedious and obsessive so of course, the spray will only work for so long.