Low_Strength

There are also 2 people that i have seen that have posted at least 20+ reviews together. Posting the exact same review over and over. “Evil_Jesus” and “grigrait”

Awful writing quality and a bad character. He hates unconditionally for actions that the character he directs his hate to has yet to even attempt. If you want us to hate the target, give us something to hate. Robert is a child in the beginning. Why skip 10 years when you can add interactions with Robert and MC, maybe changing Roberts character instead of just ignoring him. The MC is stupidly breaking connections with a possibly formidable warrior that could be a strong ally or subordinate instead of an enemy. Making the entire baratheon family an enemy isnt a good idea.

20 years of learning about the dark side, not of being alive.

Feels very dull, like every other face slapping/reincarnation novel out there. “I’ll get revenge for you” or some boring shit like that. Acting completely out of character in the first confrontation. She had been bullied for years, and although I know nothing about the cultivation levels in this universe, I dont think an apparent 6 level difference is something to scoff at.

Looking for flaws?

Switching from 1st to 3rd person a lot.

Saying “Undead Swordsman” is implying that the people that are having these thoughts, know that the MC is an undead.

“Translate” for your skelly boy.

For 2 years