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Darktea9876

Darktea9876

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2020-01-07 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
30d

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1kh

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594

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11
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20
  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98763 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง DevoureringDragon

    The time flow between the real world and the game world is different. Specifically: 1 year in the game world = 1 hour in real life. Additionally, there are various methods for quick cultivation within the game world. I hope this clarifies things!

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98765 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง ur_stupidity

    I get that you might feel differently, but I did read the book and that's just my honest take on it. Everyone's got their own opinion. Let's keep it respectful and share our thoughts.

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98766 months ago
    แปะแล้ว

    The story harbored a promising premise, but fell short of its potential. While the concept was intriguing, the execution lacked depth across various elements such as character development, kingdom building, and pacing. Although the main character showed promise, the supporting cast remained superficial. Similarly, while glimpses of a well-built kingdom were evident, overall depth was lacking. The storyline felt rushed, denying readers the chance to fully immerse themselves in the plot's intricacies. As the narrative progressed, the initial intrigue waned, leading to a gradual decline in engagement. Overall, while the book had potential, it ultimately failed to live up to it.

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98766 months ago
    แปะแล้ว

    This book offers a surprisingly good quality of translation, which is a rarity in the genre. While the main character starts off weak and inexperienced, his growth journey, aided by his system, is compelling. The plot is intriguing, although it leaves much of the evil elements unexplained, adding to their mysterious allure as ghosts and supernatural entities. Personally, I find this ambiguity appealing and am eager to delve deeper into the story. Despite encountering some editing mistakes, particularly earlier on, they have been rectified by chapter 400. This novel is vastly underrated, with numerous unexplored facets that keep readers intrigued. Witnessing the protagonist evolve into a formidable cultivator is gratifying; his transformation is believable and well-executed. Overall, I thoroughly enjoy every aspect of this novel and highly recommend it for its quality storytelling.

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98766 months ago
    แปะแล้ว

    The novel presents several recurring issues, among which I'll highlight the most significant ones. Firstly, the cultivation levels of the story often become confusing, especially when characters are referred to by multiple names. This can make it feel like reading a MTL novel, leading to moments of disorientation and difficulty in understanding the narrative. Although the introductory chapters were a positive addition, they didn't sufficiently anchor the reader, resulting in a struggle to recall key elements later on. Implementing character panels more frequently or clearer labeling of stages could alleviate this confusion. Secondly, the characters lack depth and development, detracting from the overall engagement with the story. Thirdly, as the plot progresses, it tends to lean towards a repetitive pattern of 'face-slapping' encounters, where the protagonist swiftly moves from one adversary to the next. This pacing feels incongruent with the longevity-focused narrative and could benefit from a more nuanced approach. Moving forward, the narrative's foundation on longevity presents an intriguing premise, yet fails to fully explore its potential. Instead of leveraging the protagonist's advantage of time for in-depth character development and strategic plot arcs, the story rushes through events, neglecting the opportunity for deeper world-building and exploration. Rather than delving into the intricacies of kingdom-building and the protagonist's unique advantage, the narrative gravitates towards a repetitive cycle of confrontations, diminishing the story's overall impact. This lack of depth and missed opportunity to capitalize on the central theme results in a feeling of unfulfilled potential. In conclusion, while the book isn't devoid of merits, it ultimately falls short of leaving a lasting impression. While it may serve as a passable diversion, it lacks the depth and allure to warrant a return for further reading. It can be regarded as a mediocre offering, suitable for fleeting entertainment but unlikely to resonate deeply with readers.

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98767 months ago
    แปะแล้ว

    it feels more like MTL than an original work.there are many parts that are not translated or changed in the story.I could only read the first 20 character before dropping It. it needs an overall edit.

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98767 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Anims

    Top tier Providence was much better than this one. this one was like many mediocre novel in this type of story.it's not annoying but it's not enjoyable, you will read It because you don't have a better book to read.

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98767 months ago
    แปะแล้ว

    it's locked too early chapter 15.MC has a simulator but he always is being surprised.the main point of simulation is to know everything before it happens.just some lame stories it's not worth to pay for it.

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98767 months ago
    แปะแล้ว

    This story is overwhelmingly dull, lacking any meaningful character development or immersive world-building. The narrative progresses in a tedious straight line, leaving the reader feeling like their time is being wasted. I cannot recommend it.

  • Darktea9876
    Darktea98767 months ago
    แปะแล้ว

    very bad translation.there is not much difference from MTL.it's not worth reading.