StaticMatter

agreed chapter's have been shorter lately and have been feeling like they end before they can properly rap up the scene they are trying to portray.

Well like others I wanted to like this story but it was just so hollow. Things just happen and there is no development of anykind. Honestly this feels more like a draft then a propper story.

So I read up to the last free chapter and I have to say the story is not bad but it not great either. Also be aware there are a lot of 4th wall brakes. The last thing I would like to add is if you are expecting a serious story were the MC strives to gain as much power as possible to overcome what will happen in the future then move on to another story. No one in this story feels like they are taking things seriously and a comedy tag really should be added to this story.

so just a bit confused here bullets fired in the air at a target moving away from the person who fired them would not come back down at there location in most cases. They would ark and hit a area further down range. The only two ways I could see them coming back down on a person would be if they were shooting straight up or they were shot at a extreme angle and high winds forced them back towards the shooter. Then again this could just be magic and I am over thinking things

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TB can be cured. Also it's highly infectious so one would think in a prison they would want that taken care of.

man that is a lite sentence for murder

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suspicious but here you go