Ahmed_khaled

anything but*

1 chapter in and I am already hooked what the hell author you keep fishing out masterpiece after masterpiece lol great novel and I very much like the concept of it

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Let me also reveal a secret Luke I am your fqther

great story overall I really like the writing style but pls author don't kill off the MC's family for character development use any way other than that pls

it isn't that I don't like the novel it just feels like everything is written twice some good editing would make it top grade

I just have one problem with this story writing quality the idea for the story is amazing but reading the story is like torture to my eyes I really hope he improves the writing quality and stops saying every thing twice

In my opinion Mr author is fated to be treat as long as he continues Oh BTW the mha teaser is great pls make it Lol [img=recommend][img=recommend]