Alastair_Howie

Love it. Addictive story, Interesting characters, and funny interactions between them. The setting could be a bit more fleshed out, but I don’t mind finding out bits and pieces as the story unfolds either.

This explanation was not particularly well written.

Taiven's a beast

Ohh it's probably not going to be an issue here, but he should really be careful talking about visiting large colonies of jumping spiders. If the possible 3rd time traveler knows about the telepathic spiders that is.

I love the character development in this. Probably my favourite thing about the story

"It could have been worse" summing up his life made me laugh aloud

Jedi training 101