Romane_Williams
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Again trash plot direction. If you go after a small Criminal group and they want to remain independent. They would just close all public/day time business and go underground. Wait until they’re either strong enough or the enemy is in trouble
Author just can’t let the MC survive. Instead of being someone’s henchman they could go undercover and gain some strength and jump back out. It made no sense giving up most of your dam profit just to maintain a public group. The author normally gets it right with plot direction. But this one was completely trash to be honest.
But his family had 4 under 30 and prob would have a couple more. Slight mistakes like this isn’t too big
The 35yr old former underboss gets defeated after living an additional 14yrs. This Author know nothing about time traveling.
😂😂😂 dam right
Ever* author wanted to say Ever
So author is saying. Outside powers not attached to the kingdom can interfere with the kingdom’s Awakening at any time because they’re outside the kingdoms jurisdiction? So why not try and prevent that from happening by only allowing awakening to happen at your capital or most powerful cities. If you can recruit your own dam subjects then why don’t they just submit to the strongest clan nearby?
Author just needs to finish up his sadistic Fantasy perfectly by Killing MC so his baby sister is all Alone 😂
The place where it happened wasn’t dangerous at all. It was the road leading to the Main city in the Area. All the mages should know not to battle near any main roads. They aren’t in some heavily populated area where they couldn’t find anywhere to fight. That’s like you driving down your local Highway to go downtown but two Heavily armed military group in convoys started dumping rockets at each other while your inbetween both.
So in this mage world no actual physical class exist? Because someone being called a General Running from a clash from two lower level mages is crazy. Not like it’s a Arch mage clash or the one before it.
lol no mage in a village is crazy. Only apprentices and people one stage above.. so no old powerful mage retire in the countryside anymore?
Time and again? Hasn’t if maybe been a couple days?
Huh? Why wast CC?
A day after he got his power is someday lol
Only pain is allowed here.
Is he still In prison doing this?