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Romane_Williams

Romane_Williams

Lv13
2019-12-26 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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74.5h

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121

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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    Again trash plot direction. If you go after a small Criminal group and they want to remain independent. They would just close all public/day time business and go underground. Wait until they’re either strong enough or the enemy is in trouble

    Ch 102 Membership Agreement  
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    Author just can’t let the MC survive. Instead of being someone’s henchman they could go undercover and gain some strength and jump back out. It made no sense giving up most of your dam profit just to maintain a public group. The author normally gets it right with plot direction. But this one was completely trash to be honest.

    While surprising rumors began to spread in the neighborhoods of Vicente and the Defiant Tyranny, the agreement with the Scarlet Syndicate had already been confirmed by being signed by the leaders of both sides.
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
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    This is good Writing. You brought in the bigger players and that will potentially lead to our mc gaining the attention of their backers

    Ch 97 Trouble on the Way 
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
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    But his family had 4 under 30 and prob would have a couple more. Slight mistakes like this isn’t too big

    Conception in this magic world had its complications. It was not easy at all to give birth!
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    The 35yr old former underboss gets defeated after living an additional 14yrs. This Author know nothing about time traveling.

    When he saw the young man, who had little experience with such drinks and was coughing with the blush on his face from the strong drink, Benson chuckled and wasted no time. "All right, lad, tell me what you want from the blacksmith's art. Do you want fame as a blacksmith?"
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
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    😂😂😂 dam right

    Stupidity would bring harm not just to themselves but also to their families. 
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    Ever* author wanted to say Ever

    "Tsk! You stay here. I'll take care of this," those were the last words she heard from Jesse before he left without turning back.
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    So author is saying. Outside powers not attached to the kingdom can interfere with the kingdom’s Awakening at any time because they’re outside the kingdoms jurisdiction? So why not try and prevent that from happening by only allowing awakening to happen at your capital or most powerful cities. If you can recruit your own dam subjects then why don’t they just submit to the strongest clan nearby?

    As already informed, noble families in this state didn't have the authority to form army-like groups. Only the royal family could do that. However, there were organizations in Polaris Realm that extended across the state boundaries and often wielded more power than individual states, such as the Seidel Kingdom.
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
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    Author just needs to finish up his sadistic Fantasy perfectly by Killing MC so his baby sister is all Alone 😂

    'Don't worry. Big brother will never leave you, Nina.' He wrote to her, reassuring the little girl. 'Soon you will turn 5, so I will put you in the Academy of Stars. In the meantime, I will deal with everything else. You don't have to worry about anything.'
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    The Author had to kill of both parents and kidnap his sister. Cripple his baby sister.. just so the MC can get back to doing Mafia stuff? Author you really wrote up to this point thinking it’s brilliant

    Ch 29 At the Bottom of the Well 
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
    ตอบกลับถึง 57843

    The place where it happened wasn’t dangerous at all. It was the road leading to the Main city in the Area. All the mages should know not to battle near any main roads. They aren’t in some heavily populated area where they couldn’t find anywhere to fight. That’s like you driving down your local Highway to go downtown but two Heavily armed military group in convoys started dumping rockets at each other while your inbetween both.

    "Damn you, Dax, Malik!" he shouted, recollecting the names he had heard during that battle. "One day! No matter the cost or how long it takes, one day I will find you!
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    So in this mage world no actual physical class exist? Because someone being called a General Running from a clash from two lower level mages is crazy. Not like it’s a Arch mage clash or the one before it.

    "Sigh... That is going to be a long trip," Soren, the level 7 General, sighed in a low voice.
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
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    lol no mage in a village is crazy. Only apprentices and people one stage above.. so no old powerful mage retire in the countryside anymore?

    Vice looked at him thoughtfully, aware that this man was one of the strongest magicians in the village, who should not be far from the 5th Triangle.
    Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
    แฟนตาซี · RVN_1998
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
    ตอบกลับถึง tianzekunkun

    You released a lot of chapters in a short time. Is this already completed or still being written?

    Revelation of the Orcs
    แฟนตาซี · tianzekunkun
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    Time and again? Hasn’t if maybe been a couple days?

    "What... is there? Didn't we secure the gate? Why are you more concerned about the monsters that are confined beh..." Before finishing the sentence, he decided to activate the skill once again to check. He knew that Alaric was not one to panic easily, as had been proven time and again...
    Born in apocalypse
    แฟนตาซี · COSMIC04
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams2d
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    Huh? Why wast CC?

    In the end, I have to buy him three swords, costing me 3000 CC. Now this bastard has four swords, two hanging from both sides of his waist. Remembering the look on his face when he hung all four of his swords on his waist, I knew it was all worth it. I couldn't even be mad at this little demon.
    Born in apocalypse
    แฟนตาซี · COSMIC04
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams3d
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    A day after he got his power is someday lol

    'Fuck, fuck, fuck... I cursed my luck. My luck was getting cursed without any fault, as this isn't entirely my luck's fault; I was just getting high on my power, And with all my proud pride, this was bound to happen someday.
    Born in apocalypse
    แฟนตาซี · COSMIC04
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams3d
    ตอบกลับถึง Rebeccah_Herdener

    Only pain is allowed here.

    "I-If you are this afraid, why don't we forget about this and go back? Man! In all the movies this is exactly the type of situation where the side characters movies die. You know we shouldn't be  chasing after some sinister laugh, right?" 
    Born in apocalypse
    แฟนตาซี · COSMIC04
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  • Romane_Williams
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    Is he still In prison doing this?

    'Okay, relax, and let's get started once again', Dhruv taught with a confident expression on his face.
    Born in apocalypse
    แฟนตาซี · COSMIC04
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  • Romane_Williams
    Romane_Williams3d
    ตอบกลับถึง NoNameP

    The Author went against that when he let his brother Die by some random bandit and then let his sister take over.

    Ch 400 The Day of Opening
    City of Desire
    แฟนตาซี · AnWan
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