Daoist170471

-10/10. There are only two places for homunculus in the world, these are FMA and Fate/stay night. In DxD, creating wives or concubines of homunculus means taking places in the harem from real characters.

I spent the whole day reading, and I don't regret the time I spent. It's a good fanfiction, even if it's not particularly clever in terms of alchemy.

It's still pretty weird. If he "doesn't remember", it means that he watched it. I would understand if he had forgotten such a detail as the fact that the wife of the Third Hokage was next to Kushina at the time of Obito's attack, but forget that the Nine-Tailed one will be released on Naruto's birthday? This is strange. Especially if he remembers the exact reason that Itachi used to destroy all Uchiha (at least the one that he told Sasuke).

It's pretty weird. The release of the Nine-Tailed is one of the iconic moments in the series, which gave rise to the plot structure of the main character. How could he forget about it? This is literally one of the most important things for the coming years, which will have to deprive the village of its strongest defender. It's hard to imagine how he could have prepared for her worse than just forgetting about her, lol.

I do not know if this is a translation, or if the author actually writes the story so well that I am ready to believe in his story of origin from China. 10/10. The best fan fiction I've ever read about Battle Through the Heavens.

The hero's development is a bit fast in my opinion. But otherwise, it's an interesting story. PlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholder

It's a very rare story update and questionable logic in the dialogues, but I like the idea and the writing style. PlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholderPlaceholder

Thanks

Modesty ? He just called everyone lazy and said he was better. If he were even more modest he would burst with pride

"professor"... Really ?